Chapter 1-Family

 

The outburst of loud, carefree laughter woke Renesmee suddenly from the depths of her stolen slumber.  She sighed heavily.  Sometimes she really disliked the fact that she was the only person in the family that needed or could sleep.  She proferred it when Jacob Black, her best friend and boy friend, was allowed to stay the night.

 

But that was hardly ever.  Her father, Edward Cullen, would have to be in an extremely good mood for the chances to be anywhere near good enough for him to even consider it, let alone for him to say yes.  More often than usual, had Edward started to make his feelings show, towards his only daughter's and his wife's best friend's realtionship.

 

She stomped down stairs, only pausing to shrug her black silk dressing gown over her shoulders.  Her Aunt Alice would only allow her to wear the very best of clothes.  To Renesmee, clothes were just a necessity, not really a luxury.  She didn't care what she looked like, as long it was half-decent, and suitable to the appropriate occasion. 

 

She located the source to all of the noise, which was the lounge, and pushed the door wide revealing her large and very noisy, family; her mother, Bella, her father, Edward, her Aunt Alice and Aunt Rosalie, her Uncle Jasper and Uncle Emmett, and her Nanna Esme, and her Grandpa Carlisle.

 

Chapter 2-Laughter

 

Bella sat with nearly all of her family in the lounge of the Cullen family household.  They were all sitting around, just chatting away.  Bella was quite content, sat there in Edward's arms.  Every now and then he would lift his firm, gentle fingers, and brush them along her cheek, or tuck a few escaped strands of hair behind her ear.  This had becom a second nature to them both.  The atmosphere was very relaxed and laid back.  Alice's sharp voice cut through Bella's daydream. 

 

"Hey Bella! Bella! Hello? Over her!" Alice was sat over the other side of the room, leaning against Jasper.

 

"What is it Alice?" Bella enquired, staring over at her sister-in-law, and one of her best girl-friends.

 

"Remember what we were meant to do yesterday?  And also the thing you've managed to put off for nearly a month?"

 

Bella nodded grimly at the memory of yesterday's heated conversation.  One that had also been repeated over the past 4 weeks aswell.

 

"Well, guess what!  It's gonna happen today whether you like it or not, beacuse i foresaw it this very morning!" Alice replied, ever so casually, but with a triumphant smile on her face.  Bella groaned loudly.  The whole family burst into laughter, Emmett clearly the loudest, as they all knew of Bella's strong hatred towards Alice's makeovers. 

 

If Bella had still been human, her cheeks would be bright red, and her heart would be thundering like a steam train in her chest.  But yet again, her immortal body showed no sign of imperfections.  Bella was about to retaliate when the lounge door was pushed open, by her sleep-looking, bed-headed daughter, Renesmee, who was stood there in her red cotton pyjamas and her black silky dressing gown.

 

Chapter 3-Nightmares

 

Renesmee wandered into the lounge, sleep clouding her eyes, amidst jumbled good mornngs from her  family.  She plonked herself down onto the sofa, inbetween her mother and father.  Bella wrapped her arms around her daughter and whispered in her ear "Morning darling. Sleep well?"

 

Nessie shrugged her shoulders. "Sort of.  I keep getting them nightmares, they woke me up last night.  But I was fine after i went back to sleep, so you don't worry"  she leaned her head against her mom's shoulder, her reddish-bronze, curly hair all over the place. 

 

Edward who had been listening to his daughter closely, asked, "What were they about this time?"

 

In answer, Renesmee picked up her mom's hand from her lap, and then proceeded to fix her father with a deep look of concentration.  She had lifted her mom's hand so that she could see the dream's too, as Renesmee had her own special way of communicating with others.  She was able to show people her own memories and thoughts, so that the person could see the vision in their head as if it were their own.  Edward being the mind reader that he was, could serach Renesmee's thoughts himself, so their was no need for physical contact between the father and daughter.  Once again Bella and Edward the nightmare that had haunted their daughter's dreams for the past few weeks. 

 

Renesmee was walking through woods at night, dark shadows moving around her.  Still Renesmee would walk on, undistracted by them.  She continued through the forest until the sun rose above her, and then she reached a small clearing in the closely-packed trees. Beyond the clearing was the sparkling blue ocean, white-capped waves scattered as far as the eye could see.  The air was still, no breeze, as Renesmee approached the edge of the tide.  Suddenly, as she came quite close to it, she realised there was a massive drop between herself and the sea.  She was stood at the edge of a cliff.  *snap*.  A twig broke in half amongst the woods behind her.  Renesmee spun on her heel, her eyes frantically searching the trees for an approaching stranger, her cheeks flushed pink, her pulse racing.  But she could see no-one.  She took a deep, calming breath, and began to turn back to the waters beneath her.  Out of the corner of her eye, she spotted a dark figure spritn from the trees towards her.  Renesmee turned, but wasn't quick enough.  The unknown stranger ran full pelt towards her, with outstretched arms.  The stranger's hands made contact with her shoulders and Renesmee was falling backwards off of the cliff.  Before she hit the waves, Renesmee caught a quick glimpse of her attacker.  With a sharp yank of recognition, Renesmee realised who the attacker was.  As Renesmee Carlie Cullen fell to her death, she stared into the dark brown eyes above her.  Renesmee hit the water withan almighty splash, and still her gaze was fixed at the top of the cliff.  The figure on the cliff turned away from the prepice and slowly walked away.  She let out a sigh, and pushed her long bronze ringlets out of her eyes and continued towards the trees,  Only one person Renesmee knew had chocolate brown eyes and bronze ringlets to just above their waist,  and she saw her every time she looked in the mirror...it was her.

 

Chapter 4-Mindreader

 

Edward and Bella exchanged worried glances over the top of Renesmee's head.  They both wanted to know what was causing the dreams that were constantly worrying their daughter. 

 

Renesmee looked at her parent's face's and groaned inwardly.  She didn't like it when they worried about her so much.  Because of the fact that she was an only child, she was spoiled rotten by her whole family, which wasn't all bad, but with that came the problem of her freedom.  They rarely let her out of their sight.  The only other place that she was allowed to go without her parents was her Grandpa Charlie's house, and even that was getting quite boring after nearly 16 years of going there to get out of the house. 

 

Edward squeezed Nessie's shoulders and said "Please don't stress yourself out about this. We will get to the bottom of it".  She nodded and Edward gave her a hug. 

 

Suddenly, from across the room, Alice cried out, "No! Ugh. Today's schedule has completely disapeared. What has he done now?".  Edward's grip tightened around Nessie's shoulders as he read his sister's mind. 

 

"What? What did you see Alice?"  Bella asked, who was now thoroughly confused.  Just as Alice opened her mouth to answer, the front door opened, and with it came a voice, which echoed through the empty hallway, towards the lounge.

 

"Hey guys, where are you?"

 

Nessie called out "Jake! We're in the lounge. Come through!"  She made to stand up, but Edward pulled her back to sit next to him.  Renesmee stared at her dad questionably , wondering why he was acting so strange.  As Jacob's footsteps came closer to the lounge door, Edward's face became more and more angry, as he read Jake's mind.  Renesmee continued to stare at him, thoughts rushing through her head. 

 

Jacob came through the door with a cheery "Hey guys!  What are you all up to?" he glanced around at them all when nobody answered him. 

 

He opened his mouth to ask what was wrong, when Edward growled "How dare you!"

 

Jacob met his eyes and shrank back towards the door, realising what had happened.  The rest of the Cullens stared back and forth between the two.  They all wondered what was wrong.

 

Chapter 5 - Arguments

 

"Get out of this house now!" Edward roared, leaping up from the sofa.  Renesmee, who Edward had still been holding, fell of the sofa and onto the floor.

 

"Edward, just calm down.  Jacob can't have done anything that bad." Carlisle approached Edward from behind and spoke to his son in a soothing voice. 

 

From her position on the floor, Renesmee eyed her Uncle Jasper meaningfully, and then calm swept through the room, taking Edward's anger with it, for now anyway.  Jacob walked the last few steps over to Renesmee, gripped her under the arms, and lifted her onto her feet.  He then stepped away from her, his eyes remaining locked on Edward's.

 

"Look, I'm sorry ok-" Jacob began to apologise but was interupted by Rosalie who asked,


"Can someone please explain what he did?" Everybody turned their gaze towards Edward and waited for an answer.

 

He curled his hands into fists and said "Last week, when he took Renesmee to see Charlie, he didn't.  He took her to Seattle instead." His voice trembled with anger, which threatened to morph onto a yell at any given moment.

 

"But Edward, Charlie rang after Nessie came back and told us they'd just left!" Bella exclaimed, refusing to believe that her best friend had betrayed her trust like that.  Jacob knew how important Nessie was to them.  He wouldn't dare to put her in that much danger. 

 

"Bells, we did go to Charlie's, but he saw how unhappy Nessie was and practically forced us back out of the door.  He said he'd cover for us." Jacob cut across what Edward was about to say and explained to Bella instead.  Bella just sat there and stared at Jacob, fury blazing in her eyes. 

 

"That still doesn't give you the opportunity to to abuse our trust for you!  We had faith in you and you've blown it!" Alice had joined in now. 

 

Esme , who'd been watching Renesmee closely, stood up and said "Nessie, do you want to come with me for a minute?" Nessie nodded blankly staring at the floor.  Esme towards her grandaughter, took her arm and led her out of the room.  Emmett and Carlisle followed close behind.  Jacob watched them until they were out of the door, then took a deep breath and turned to face the rest of the room. 

 

Nessie followed Esme upstairs, to the farthest place away from the living room, but it still didn't mask the yells echoing from downstairs.

 

 

 

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Chapter 14 - Chaos

Jasper bolted out of the window after his brothers. He was angry at Edward for taking his mood out on Alice and he was going to make him pay.

Carlisle followed to try and break up the fight.

Alice stood against the wall being comforted by Esme.

Rose remained kneeling on the ground and Bella wandered over to the broken window, still lost inside herself.

Her mind was full of turmoil. She just didn't know what to do. She stared aimlessly at Edward, Jasper and Emmett fighting on the front lawn. Carlisle ran towards them and grabbed Jasper, preventing him from dismantling his brothers. Carlisle spoke urgently to him and suddenly all three of the Cullen brothers stood still. Jasper must have worked his magic.

Edward stood glaring at Emmett, but then his eyes turned towards the window where Bella stood.

She heard the intake of breath behind her, and she turned to look at Alice's vacant expression.

She was having a vision.

Edward was thorugh the window in a flash and shot towards Alice. Her eyes became aware just in time to step back and raise her hands to stop Edward from colliding with her.

"Really?" he asked, his eyes flashing. Alice nodded, her face lighting up wit joy.

She turned to her family and said, her voice trembling "We're going to get a visit from Nahuel, and he's bringing his father Joham, and his three sisters with him. They can help Nessie!" she danced over towards Jasper and took his hanfd.

Carlisle asked the obvious question "But what do they know that we don't? I mean, none of them are doctors of any sort, and Joham is a scientist"

"Yes Carlise," Alice replied happily, "But he's a scientist of genetics and different species of animals. And he studied psychology. Not to mention he practically invented half vampires!" her tinkling bell-like laugh filled the room. Bella looked up startled.

Edward continued "He knows everything about them and from what Alice just saw, he will know how to save Nessie."

A voice came from across the room, trembling with anticipation "Are you sure?" Bella slowly approached her family, her eyes glinting with the small amount of hope she had. Edward nodded and she threw her arms around his neck.

"Nessie's really going to be okay?" she whispered into her husband's ear.

"Yes!" he whispered back. "She's going to be fine!"
Chapter 15 - Wolf

Jacob marched out of the Cullen house, down the steps, towards the trees. This was all his fault, his damn stupid fault. Nessie was lying in that upstairs bedroom, clinging to life by her fingernails, and he wasn't allowed to help, even if he could.

Edward had charged into the house straight towards him, demanding to know what happened. As if he blamed Jacob. As if Jacob would have hurt Nessie.

When Jacob hadn't been able to answer, Edward had grabbed him by the collar of his t-shirt and dragged him out to the front door. "You WILL go out of this door, and you WILL stay out, understand? You will NEVER set foot in this house EVER again if you know what's good for you." he'd yelled at him. He practically threw him out of the house, onto the porch.

Jacob could see Bella stood behind Edward's shoulder, expecting her to be sympathetic, but no. She was stood, knees apart, hands curled into fists, her bright golden eyes sparkling with fury, her whole appearance radiating anger.

Jacob turned on his heel and strode out, slamming the door behind him.

Now he paced between the trees, debating his next move when he just decided to wait it out. He sat down and leaned against a fallen tree, destroyed the last time Emmett and Bella had play-fighted.

He stared at the huge house, the glass wall reflecting the surrounded area exactly. Each tree, each shadow, the narrow beams of light filtering through the trees as the sun began to dip below the river in the distance, eaving like a silver ribbon across the landscape, the birds as they took flight from their forest homes, each fallen leaf, and Jacob himself.

His face was creased with worry, his eyes deep with regret, his whole figure looking like a broken man, which he was. His body was only a shell into which life was stored. It was Renesmee who gave him life, the air he breathed, his purpose to keep on living, his only reason to stay alive. Without her he was nothing, an empty shell, a dark shadow, a lone wolf. What would he do if she died? Deep down. Jacob already knew the answer to that one.
hey you guys, how r u all???!!! i hope you like the two chapters i just put on, and the end of chapter 13. please R&R. also, i'm starting back to school tomorrow, so i might not post more ina wee while, cos i havent written any more yet. well, i'm nearly finished writn chapter 16. hopefull i'll post it soon. anyway i love u guys, happy reading!!!!!! please comment!!!!!!!
this is amazing please keep writing!!!!!!
I was missing a new chapter, thanks for uploading! As always great!!
thanx guys, i luv that ur still enjoying it and u want to read more!!! i promise i'll post chapter 16 as soon as i've finished writing it. will be in touch soon xxx hugs =D
Thanks and take care. Kisses!!!

Rachel "Renesmee" Black said:
thanx guys, i luv that ur still enjoying it and u want to read more!!! i promise i'll post chapter 16 as soon as i've finished writing it. will be in touch soon xxx hugs =D
wow amazing you should write a book
first things first, no chapter 16 yet, but i'm working on it i promise! I'm juggling 5 higher subjects at school, 2 of which are the hardest highers u can get, so i'm concentrating on getting that straight in my head before anything else! Also i'm a designer for the schools Trash Fashion show this year, so i'm desperatally tryin to think up designs for wednesday, and i'm not succeeding! Any ideas? Please! Second, angel smith, u totally made my day, no year! Ur a goddess of fandom. Seriously. Thanku so much. U hav no idea how much appreciated that was, it boosted me on to try to finish the next chapter as quickly as possible. Massive werewolf hugs to you my friend! And third, any questions about anything, me, the story, the gigantic slightlyscary world in general, please don't hesitate to ask. And i'm always up for helping u guys out in any way i possibly can, so any favours, i honestly don't bite! Hopefully the next chapter will be up soon, but until then, in the epic words of tigger from winnie the pooh, TTFN ; ta ta for now! Love y'all loads kisses and hugs x x x x :) :) :) and smiley faces! Tee hee!
Note. . . I am so sorry!!!! i cannot believe i hav left it this long to post the next chapter. i guess life gets in the way sumtimes without you even noticing it. hope u like it guys. . .and don't forget to read and review! luv y'all, kisses.

Chapter 16 - Visitors

The sun rose above the horison, revealing Jacob in the same place he'd sat all night. No way was he leaving unill Nessie was all right again. He stood up and stretched, wondering if Edward would actually kill him if he tried to visit Ness without his permission. He decided that there would be no harm in trying to get in. Before he could change his mind, he strode purposefully up to the front door. Jacob listened but he couldn't hear anything. Then he froze.

He could hear a car turning off of the highway, onto the Cullen's drive. He ducked behind a giant oak as the car came into view. Jacob peeked around the branches, his heart in his mouth.

Who would be visiting the Cullen's when Nessie was like this? It definetly wasn't Charlie because Bella had phoned him after Renesmee had ran off, telling him they would be away on vacation, so he wouldn't keep bothering them.

Then Jacob thought, what if Bella's Mom had come to visit? No, surely she wouldn't. Ever since Bella had moved to Forks, the distance between the mother and daughter had increased, but not in just miles. After her wedding, Bella had only ever talked to her mother on the phone, but more recently, that had even stopped.

So if it wasn't Renee, who was it? The car had pulled up outside of the house bu now. It was a metallic red Saab, and it looked really expensive, as if the owner had remodelled it to his or hers own specifications. Jacob had never seen this car in his entire life, so he had no idea who was about to get out of it.

The engine was shut off and all four doors opened. The driver was a tall, black-haired man, dressed entirely in black, apart from his shirt. Black trousers, black waistcoat and tie, with a balck suit jacket to finish it off.


So sorry ran out of time!!! post more soon hopefully!! luv y'all!!! hugs xxx
I'm just as deep into this story you're writing as I was in the twilight books. However, I must say, I'm one of the people who thinks Renesmee and Jacob should not be together imprint or no imprint. Renesmee is only two of her kind, and it only seems right that she and the young man Alice found who is like her, they should get to know each other. After all, Jacob has an entire tribe of his line. Also, I can't forget how terrible Jacob was to Edward and his family because hated vampires and he wanted to be with Bella imprint or no imprint. Imprinting to me doesn't give the imprintee much control over who she is or what's really good for her. Sorry to rant on, but just my thoughts. Keep up the great story from a fans POV. You should consider wrting a book of you're own, because you definitely have the talent to keep ones interest. Great job!!

Rachel "Renesmee" Black said:
thanks! it's good to know that i'm not writing a story that nobody's reading!!! i'm very glad that you like it. i'm also very honoured that you think my story is better than your's. i'll need to have a read of it. and thanks for adding me as a friend! i think i'm up to eleven friends now. i'll keep writing it as long as at least one person is reading it!! Rach xxx hugs xxx ps i don't really think i'm that good a writer, so all your wonderfull comments are spurring me on!!! i hope i don't let you all down. and if u think any one bit of it is rubbish, please tell me so i can improve! even if its just a typo!!! xxxx

bianca rob>pattinson said:
that was so awesome i jus wrote a story but not as good as that
this is so cool you are such an amazing writer!

Rachel "Renesmee" Black said:
Note. . . I am so sorry!!!! i cannot believe i hav left it this long to post the next chapter. i guess life gets in the way sumtimes without you even noticing it. hope u like it guys. . .and don't forget to read and review! luv y'all, kisses.

Chapter 16 - Visitors

The sun rose above the horison, revealing Jacob in the same place he'd sat all night. No way was he leaving unill Nessie was all right again. He stood up and stretched, wondering if Edward would actually kill him if he tried to visit Ness without his permission. He decided that there would be no harm in trying to get in. Before he could change his mind, he strode purposefully up to the front door. Jacob listened but he couldn't hear anything. Then he froze.

He could hear a car turning off of the highway, onto the Cullen's drive. He ducked behind a giant oak as the car came into view. Jacob peeked around the branches, his heart in his mouth.

Who would be visiting the Cullen's when Nessie was like this? It definetly wasn't Charlie because Bella had phoned him after Renesmee had ran off, telling him they would be away on vacation, so he wouldn't keep bothering them.

Then Jacob thought, what if Bella's Mom had come to visit? No, surely she wouldn't. Ever since Bella had moved to Forks, the distance between the mother and daughter had increased, but not in just miles. After her wedding, Bella had only ever talked to her mother on the phone, but more recently, that had even stopped.

So if it wasn't Renee, who was it? The car had pulled up outside of the house bu now. It was a metallic red Saab, and it looked really expensive, as if the owner had remodelled it to his or hers own specifications. Jacob had never seen this car in his entire life, so he had no idea who was about to get out of it.

The engine was shut off and all four doors opened. The driver was a tall, black-haired man, dressed entirely in black, apart from his shirt. Black trousers, black waistcoat and tie, with a balck suit jacket to finish it off.


So sorry ran out of time!!! post more soon hopefully!! luv y'all!!! hugs xxx

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