My Story(plz look)
This is a story I wrote in wat should hv happen between Jacob and bella starting at eclpise wen Jacob kissed her!
Bella-wen Jacob kissed me it wz so amazing that I had to kiss bk so I did and it felt different then wen Edward kissed me so much better then he pulls away
Jacob-Bella I'm sorry I kissed u
Bella-no Jacob it wz amazing I like it-I blushed-u kissed me with love Edward never kisses me like that
Jacob-u mean the leach it's because he's scared to kiss u and brake u and that's y if u pick me it will b a life u never felt true
Bella-then Jacob...I do pick u amillion time I pick u I want to b with u 4ever Jacob said,"Bella realy u mean it?" Bella,"of couse I mean it Jake now come here",I pulled him close to me and this time I kissed him and then I felt his warm breath in my mouth and then u pulled away and said,"Jake we hv to tell Edward though he is expecting to pick me up member?"then he said,"okets go meet him then u tell him k"he smiled his perfect smile and I started waking tward the wen I felt his hand grab mine and I smiled at him,"Jake r u happy like realy happy?"he answered,"of couse I am happy I mean the grls ofmy dream is finally seeing she loves me and not that blood sucking leach."then I looked at him and got in the car he got in and we drove to were Edward wz waiting then we both got out and Edward smiled at me and I said,"Edward we need to tak."then he said,"wat about Bella?" so i answered,"um well...I'm sorry bt I don't love u I love Jacob and u can't make me change my mind."theni looked down and wen I looked up he had dissapeared then jake came to me and said,"he'll b allright bells."then huger me tight and I hugsed bk and buried my face in his bare chest and then looked up and kissed him once and then he took me bk to his house
wen we arived Billy and Sam were waiting 4 me and bells I wonder if I had done somen' bad or Bella did?then Sam said,"Jacob we need to tak witch is wen I knew somen' wz wrong so I fallowed him into my house,"yes Sam?" he answered,"u made one of the Cullens mad?"so I said,"yes I'm so sorry sam u see...,he cut me off and said,"sorry? Why on earth r u sorry I'm happy this means they will prabably leave and well take care around here
Bella-wen Jacob kissed me it wz so amazing that I had to kiss bk so I did and it felt different then wen Edward kissed me so much better then he pulls away
Jacob-Bella I'm sorry I kissed u
Bella-no Jacob it wz amazing I like it-I blushed-u kissed me with love Edward never kisses me like that
Jacob-u mean the leach it's because he's scared to kiss u and brake u and that's y if u pick me it will b a life u never felt true
Bella-then Jacob...I do pick u amillion time I pick u I want to b with u 4ever Jacob said,"Bella realy u mean it?" Bella,"of couse I mean it Jake now come here",I pulled him close to me and this time I kissed him and then I felt his warm breath in my mouth and then u pulled away and said,"Jake we hv to tell Edward though he is expecting to pick me up member?"then he said,"okets go meet him then u tell him k"he smiled his perfect smile and I started waking tward the wen I felt his hand grab mine and I smiled at him,"Jake r u happy like realy happy?"he answered,"of couse I am happy I mean the grls ofmy dream is finally seeing she loves me and not that blood sucking leach."then I looked at him and got in the car he got in and we drove to were Edward wz waiting then we both got out and Edward smiled at me and I said,"Edward we need to tak."then he said,"wat about Bella?" so i answered,"um well...I'm sorry bt I don't love u I love Jacob and u can't make me change my mind."theni looked down and wen I looked up he had dissapeared then jake came to me and said,"he'll b allright bells."then huger me tight and I hugsed bk and buried my face in his bare chest and then looked up and kissed him once and then he took me bk to his house
wen we arived Billy and Sam were waiting 4 me and bells I wonder if I had done somen' bad or Bella did?then Sam said,"Jacob we need to tak witch is wen I knew somen' wz wrong so I fallowed him into my house,"yes Sam?" he answered,"u made one of the Cullens mad?"so I said,"yes I'm so sorry sam u see...,he cut me off and said,"sorry? Why on earth r u sorry I'm happy this means they will prabably leave and well take care around here
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Permalink Reply by ☽ ℓε v ι т α т ι σ η ☾ on
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All- O.O Coooooollll!!!!!
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Permalink Reply by Vocoloids. on -
bellas Pro-I saw that Sam and Jake wen they went into jake's house wonder if he did
anything bad then he comes put smileing and I ask,"eat happen Jake?"and he said-nothing bells." so then I asked him if we could get somen' to eat I wz starving.so we were driving to a fast food place probably McDanls wen all of a sudden...Edward is on the hood of the car and Jake steps on the brakes hard so the truck spins alittle and then stops and Edward said,"Bella way did I do to loose?so I told him,"nothing it's just I kno Jake could make me the happiest grl on earth and to tell u somen' U Left me 4 a long time I wz BACICLY DIEING!!!I wouldn't eat or go to scewl and I still am mad and then Jake comes and makes me happy again bt then u show up again and 4 some dang reason I PICK U!!"so he levee probably mad and then Jake drives me home insted to get food so then I wz bmbed out and so we both go in and Charlie says,"hey guys wat u been up to?"and Jake says Bella says she picks me as her boyfriend not Edward."and then Charlie says'realy that's good."
(sorry that's all i hv to go thx 4 Replying thou!!)
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Permalink Reply by Amber Cullen on -
It would be SUCH a crappy story if that happened. plus, eventually Jacob would dump Bella because she isnt really his true love and Bella would go back to edward. Renesmee would never be born and jacob would be lonely forever, the volturi kill bella because she is still human and know bout vamps, and edward kills himself, the rest of the cullens are sad 4eva and charlie gets killed by victoria, renee is killed by victoria also, and it would be stupid. Stephanie Meyer wrote the book and you cant change it. it was wrote to be that way so suck it up and return to ur pathetic life of trying to ruin books and sitting on the computer all day.
btw, ever heard of spell check? nobody can understand half the stupid crap you wrote up there!
and dont ever try to be a famous writer. go for something brainless like football player or surfer.
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Love it!
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Permalink Reply by Olivia Cullen on
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AMESOME I LOVE IT!!!!
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AMESOME I LOVE IT!!!!
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AMESOME I LOVE IT!!!!
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AweSome!!!!
the induvidual!! said:bellas Pro-I saw that Sam and Jake wen they went into jake's house wonder if he did anything bad then he comes put smileing and I ask,"eat happen Jake?"and he said-nothing bells." so then I asked him if we could get somen' to eat I wz starving.so we were driving to a fast food place probably McDanls wen all of a sudden...Edward is on the hood of the car and Jake steps on the brakes hard so the truck spins alittle and then stops and Edward said,"Bella way did I do to loose?so I told him,"nothing it's just I kno Jake could make me the happiest grl on earth and to tell u somen' U Left me 4 a long time I wz BACICLY DIEING!!!I wouldn't eat or go to scewl and I still am mad and then Jake comes and makes me happy again bt then u show up again and 4 some dang reason I PICK U!!"so he levee probably mad and then Jake drives me home insted to get food so then I wz bmbed out and so we both go in and Charlie says,"hey guys wat u been up to?"and Jake says Bella says she picks me as her boyfriend not Edward."and then Charlie says'realy that's good." (sorry that's all i hv to go thx 4 Replying thou!!)
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