tell me what you think and please be honest
preface:
what would you do if you loved the same person as your brother? what would you do if she completed you both? what if you could not hide anything from them? if you could choose, would you choose your life or your family?

chapter one- the past
sitting in the middle of the clearing, where the stand off between the voltri and the cullens took place. i sit here thinking about the past few year. so much has happened. well we scared the voltri away and saved the cullens. after that things slowed down and i hang with jake at the cullens place. renesemee is still growing but not to much now. jake, edward and bella are so happy she is going to be fine. now jake knows that she will be fully grow in six years. he does not even want to think of her that way because he is right now being a brother to her. they will be together though. funny thing is that if jake did see her that way edward would most likly rip his head off. edward and i are close he is like family to me. the rest of the cullens are too. his family helps me to be able to get through the rough times. its a hard when my dad passed away because i was heartbroken and then i turned into a werewolf.
"shapeshifter" edward said to me. man he just scared the crude out of me.
"sorry i did not mean to sneak up on you" he said.
"its ok man" i said "so why are you here?"
"just checking on you i was hunting and heard you thinking about your dad" he whispered.
"oh well just thinking about all ive been through since my dad passed" i whispered to him.
"do you want to talk about it?"he asked.
"i think i do because i can never talk to anyone about it," as i was talking he walked closer and sat down in front of me.

chapter 2- he has missed so much
edward sat there waiting pateintly.
"well i just hate that he died i miss him so much" i cried out. he put a reasuring hand on my shoulder.
"im sorry i know what you are going through" he said but how could he.
"HOW! HOW COULD YOU KNOW? HUH DID YOU HAVE TO WATCH YOUR DAD DIE?" i screamed at him. he sat there unmoved by my out burst.
"yes i did my dad have the spanish influenza before me," he whispered. i was in too much shock to say anything so i just thought man i'm so sorry i didn't know please forgive me. he just nodded.
i gained my voice again and said "i just can't talk to anyone because its still really hard for leah and the pack will call me a wuss if if i think about how much i miss him. so i just dont talk about him and try not to think about him"
"i know its ok just know you can always talk to me" he said. that little statement gave me hope that everything will be ok because i do not have to keep everything bottled up.
then all of a sudden we hear this loud growl. edward looks around
"what is that"he said to me. i smiled and laughed because the growl was my stomach.
"im hungry thats all" i spoke still laughing.
"esme is making food at the house if you want any." he said
"heck ya i love her cooking" i said "i'll race you back" he laughed and after i turned wolf we took off for home. he beat me of course because he has vampire speed. when we got to the front lawn we heard something going on inside. then we heard a scream.

Chapter 3- back to school
we glanced at each other then took off toward the house. when we got into the house we saw nessie pouting. bella walked over to us.
"jake wanted to put her down for a nap" bella stated and smiled at us. edward and i nodded.
"please, please nessie will you go take a nap?" jake pleaded with her.
" no, i dont wanna" she said shaking her head "why should i? mommy and daddy never do."
"nessie, if you don’t take a nap then jake will have to leave" edward threatened
"so i don’t care" she said, but you could she the hurt on her face and on jake's.
"that means no more werewolves" he said
" no, i love my wolf people, especially my jakey ill take a nap daddy" she said then ran up stairs.
edward kissed bella and grabbed her hand as they went together to tuck nessie in. jake sighed then followed. how i wish i had what edward and bella had or what jake and nessie will have. i heard a growl from upstairs. sorry.
"hungry" esme called from the kitchen.
"very, thanks"i said to her. i walked into the kitchen and it smelled amazing.
"where is everyone?" i asked.
"rose and em are on another honeymoon, alice and jazz are shopping, and carlisle is at the hospital" esme said while Edward, jake, and bella walked in.
"interesting, i feel bad for jasper though. why would he want to go shopping?" as i was talking esme brought me food, "thanks" I said
i started to stuff my face with the hot eggs, bacon, and waffles. "these are my favorite thanks"
edward is the one who answered my question "well, first of all, he will follow her anywhere and second, alice is giving him a make over" edward continued "he is not really enjoying himself but he will do anything for her."
"why does he need a make over?" i asked
"alice will not, cannot, go a month without one" he replied.
"oh, i feel bad for you guys" i said laughing
"Guess what seth" jake asked
"what?" i asked
"we are going back to school!" he said
"NO! why? i dont want to" i whinned
"well if i have too then you do to" he said
"why do you have to? " i continued to whine
"because if he is going to be with my daughter, then he is going to and if you are going to hang out here, then you do too, because we cant give renesmee the wrong impression" bella pointed out
"ok, i understand, when do we start?" i asked
"you will start next week and you and jake will be juniors" edward said. i hate this why do i have to go to school. hopefully i will not get mad or maybe, i could then turn wolf and i would get out of going to school. great idea!
all of a sudden i felt a smack on the back of my head. Oh, crude, Edward can hear everything i am thinking. fine i wont turn but i wont pretend to like it either.
"well, you will be going whether you like it or not." edward said to me. Everyone was looking at us like we were crazy.
"dont worry about it" edward said to everyone "oh! alice and jasper are home"

Chapter 4- surprises
Alice and jasper walk in holding hands. Then, a wave of calm hit me. I looked around the room
and saw jasper smiling at me.
“Why?” I asked him.
“Well, we walked in and you got really sad so I thought I would help,” he said to me.
“Thanks. I think,” I said to him.
“Welcome, I am here to help,” he said. Why is he being nice to me? I thought to Edward.
He shrugged his shoulders. Whatever, I guess it’s cool. He smiled at that thought.
“So did you have fun?” Bella directed towards Alice and Jasper.
“Tons!” Alice squealed.
“yup,” Jasper added not quite as excited
“Oh! Seth. Jacob. I got you guys something,” she said.
“Really? what?” I was scared as I replied
“I got you guys new clothes for school,” she squealed again.
Uh oh! I thought to Edward. What am I in for?
He started dying laughing. Everyone stopped to stare at him. Every person, but Edward and me,
had a confused look on their face. Edward composed himself and said, “You will have to ask
her.”
“Do you guys want to see your stuff?” Alice asked. Any one could hear the excitement in her
voice. She looked at Jake. “Whatever,” he said.
“I guess, but how did you know we were going to school?” I questioned.
“I saw you going to school,” she replied. “Like, in a vision, I don’t know how, but I did.
So, are you guys ready to see your stuff?”
“Ok,” we replied harmoniously, but no where near excited.
Alice started jumping around the room. This is gonna be bad.

Chapter 5 – Clothes
She ran to Jake and me and grabbed both of us by the arm. She then ran up the stairs dragging us with her to her room. And there was no need resisting. She also held ten bags in her hand. She set two bags off to the side, I wonder who those are for, and emptied the other eight on the bed.
“Are all those for us?” I asked really scared for the answer.
“Yes, aren’t you happy?” she asked with this puppy dog sad face.
“Yes, we are Alice.” Jake replied convincingly.
“Me too, Alice, sorry, I’m just not used to it.” I said. She smiled.
“Well, you better get use to it!” she said and laughed.
We joined in then, she started showing us the clothes. We did a fashion show for the entire family. She got me Polo Ralph Lauren Slim Fit Bleecker Wash and Boot Cut Essex Wash Jeans and for Jake she got the Polo Ralph Lauren Classic-Fit Bleeker Wash jeans and Classic-Fit Twill Jeans. For the tops, she was pretty limited; she got us Polo Ralph Lauren Classic Fit Mesh, in every color you can think of.
“Thanks so much, Alice these are amazing and you are incredibly awesome and sweet,” I said giving her a hug
“So what did you get Jasper?” I questioned
“Well, I got him some Polo Ralph Lauren cashmere cable crewnecks in those warm tones he likes and Merrick Linen silk pants. Also some Poplin trail cargo pants in navy and khaki. I also bought him Chuck Taylor All-Star high tops in gray and low tops in black,” She replied.
It was about seven o’clock and Esme had already made dinner.
The phone rang and Edward answered, and then handed the phone to Jake.
“Yea. Ok, will do. Call me with an update,” Jake answered to whoever was on the receiving end.
“What’s that all about?” I asked Jake.
“Nothing,” he said but he had a guilty look on his face.
“Ok then,” I said. About three hours later, Edward asked if I could stay over that night because he and Jake had to leave.
“Ok, whatever man,” I replied. After he and Edward had left, I went upstairs to put Nessie to bed. What is going on here? Why is everyone walking on eggshells? Also, why are Jake and Edward leaving?

Chapter 6 – The Dream
American Idol was on and the next thing I know, I was on 1st Beach. Whoa. How did I get here? I started walking down the beach and saw a bunch of couples everywhere I turned. I ran away, but no matter where I went I saw more couples. I started to run faster and faster. All of a sudden a girl appears in front of me. Then, I woke up.
Whoa. What was that? I thought to myself. I got up to go check on Nessie, but she was still sleeping soundly. I walked back down the stairs. Where is everyone? I thought out loud. Whatever, I thought and headed back to my bed, the couch.
As soon as my head hit the pillow, I was back at 1st Beach. This time I did not see couples; I saw people holding puzzle pieces that came in pairs. In my hand, I saw a puzzle piece without a pair. On my piece it said Soul. What is that suppose to mean? I started to walk down the beach. Everyone had matching pieces. Finally, I saw a girl who did not have a pair. She was gorgeous. I ran to her. When I got there, I looked at her piece and it said Mate. The weird thing was her piece had room for two puzzle pieces. What could that mean? Standing there, we put the pieces together, and they fit. Well, what ever the two spot mean, I don’t care. I have found her, my Soul Mate.
Then, I woke up suddenly. “Wow. That was a crazy dream,” I said and drifted back to sleep.

Chapter 7 – What the Heck?
I woke up to silence and the smell of food. I got up and walked to the kitchen.
I found everyone, including Rose and Emmett, sitting at the kitchen table waiting for something or someone. I felt a wave of calm wash over me, and then I realized that everyone was staring at me.
“Um, so what’s up?” I asked nervously.
“Well, something happened last night. That’s why we had to leave,” Edward said to me.
“Ok. So what happened?” I asked.
“You know your friend, Patrick?” he asked me.
“Yea, no, no, no. No, it happened didn’t it? No! Why?” I asked them.
“Well, he turned because soon there will be three vampires coming through town.” Edward replied explaining everything in one statement.
“So, are they like you?” I questioned.
“One of them is a vegetarian, but the other two are not,” he said.
“Ok. So how’s Patrick?” I asked.
“He is ok just freaked out like we all were,” Jake said while mock punching me.
“That’s good I guess. Man, I hate that this had to happen to another guy especially my best friend,” I said. Gosh this is horrible. I can’t believe this. Poor Patrick.
“He will be ok; Alice has seen it,” Edward replied to my thoughts.
“Ok, so Carlisle, have you figured out how Alice can see us now?” I questioned.
“It seems that since she is around you more, her visions are adapting to your kind,” Carlisle replied.
“Oh. Well that’s really cool,” I said. “So, how is our first day going to be?” might as well try to brace myself.
“Well,” she said as her eyes glazed over. Edward started laughing and her eyes went back to normal. She joined in laughing with Edward. “I could tell you, but it will be more fun to let you find out on your own.”
“That’s unfair Alice,” I whined.
“Yea, but I don’t care ha-ha” she said still laughing.
“Ok, so back to the matter at hand,” Edward interrupted our little battle.
“So, they are going to be here in a week.”

Chapter 8 - School
It’s been a week since Patrick first turned, and this week the new vampires are supposed to come to town. Alice has gotten my clothes and Jake’s together, since we are starting school today. So, I'm getting ready, and I realize that Bella is missing. Edward said that she had family business to attend to. But aren’t we here family also. He said he was going to take us to school to get signed up.
“COME ON SETH! YOU DON’T WANT TO BE LATE TO YOUR FIRST DAY OF SCHOOL! DO YOU?!” Edward yelled. Oh yes I do! I replied in my head.
“GET YOUR FURRY BUTT DOWN HERE NOW! SETH! WE ARE WAITING ON YOU!” he yelled.
“FINE!” I yelled back. “COMING!” man he is impatient for someone who will live forever.
I walked down the stairs grumbling. So, I get in the back of Edwards Volvo because Jake already has the front seat. YOU SUCK! No pun intended. WHY DO I HAVE TO GO TO SCHOOL? WHY ARE YOU BEING IMPATIENT? He just sat there glaring at me for the entire ride. Finally, he spoke up.
“Seth, just trust me, it will be ok and please stop screaming at me, you are making my head hurt,” he told me.
“Fine,” I grumbled. When we got to the school, Edward took us to the front office to get our schedules. As we were heading out of the office, I saw Bella’s Ferrari.
“What is she doing here?” I asked Edward.
“She is signing her cousin up for school,” he said.
“Oh, is that what the family business was?” I questioned.
“Yes, her cousin flew in yesterday,” he told me.
“Cool, I guess, so why is she here?” I asked.
“Gosh, you ask a lot of questions. Her parents passed away and the only relative left is Charlie. He asked Bella to bring her because he had to get to work early,” He replied.
“That’s really sad,” I said.
As we were talking Bella and her cousin walked up to us. Wow! She was gorgeous. She had light brown hair with auburn highlights, which looked great with her pale complexion. She also had the most mesmerizing deep, dark blue eyes. They so were beautiful I could not take my eyes off her. All of a sudden everything was gone but her. I could not remember anything - my friends, family, the pack, I could not even remember my own name. All I knew was that she was it. She was my soul mate, my imprint.
“Seth. Seth? Seth!” Bella worried, “Edward is he ok?”
“Shhh. its ok, it is happening,” he replied.
Wait! Did everyone else know? I questioned him in my head. All he did was nod and I had to hold back a growl. We will talk about this later. I told him with my thoughts.
“Well, Seth this is Samantha,” Bella introduced her cousin.
“Hi Samantha. I’m Seth.” I said to her. Could she hear the way I caressed her name as I spoke.
“Hey Seth,” she said and giggled.
“I’m going to get your schedule Samantha,” Bella said.
“Ok, what ever,” she replied not taking her eyes from mine. Bella sighed and walked away with Edward toward the office.
“Samantha this is Jake,” I said to her and my eyes still never moved from hers.
“Hey,” she said and that was all.
“So what is your first class Jake?” I asked for the first time taking my eyes from hers.
“It is gym,” he said with this huge goofy grin on his face.
“Cool, my first class in biology,” I told him. Bella and Edward walked back holding hands. I saw Samantha’s schedule in Bella’s hand. I took it before she handed it to Samantha. I saw that her first class was biology too.
“Your first class is biology too,” I told her while handing her schedule back to her. As I was handing it back to her, our hands touched. The spot it touched tingled with unusual electricity.
“Thank you,” she said when she got her schedule.
“Welcome, do you want to head to class? We don’t want to be late on our first day,” I said and she nodded. Thanks for the line. I thought to Edward and he laughed as he and Bella headed to their cars.
We walk away leaving Jake just staring there with his mouth open.

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yea it would... but it would be fun!!!

Fang - LOVE YOU ALL GUYS said:
how would we do it? You write some, send it to me, I write some send it to you. That would turn out very interesting indeed.

Dani said:
i think that would be freaking awsome!!!

Fang - LOVE YOU ALL GUYS said:
Yeah, I know, It was so sad, I wonder if thats the jordan I have on my msn......I don't know if she had it or not. I wish she could see my stories, I jsut finished my 4th. She was so great. I think she'd want us to continue, maybe do a joint story. I think that would be really cool......what do you think Dani?
dang
i dont think i got it..OMG wonder if shes ok tho
like what would make her leave u know.

Dani said:
we dont know... she sent out a message saying she was leaving but she wouldnt tell us why... by the time i got it i was not able to say anything to her... or find a way that we could reach her... and im heart broken about it... i at least wanted to say bye
wow these are long um im going to copy them and save them k that way i can read them latter when my kids go to sleep I have read 1-8 and they are grate really keep it going k
um i got chapters 1- 17 is there any more then that please let me know this is really good stuff truly send me a message if u update it agene k.
and Im sorry I read that some one gave you a bad review it hurts I know I got quite a few on my poem books that I had published but just do what i do if you can let it just role off k cause really i mean the way i see it you get far more good reviews then bad so u must be doing some thing write and I got a lot of bad reviews and im still writing my poems and have a few other books in the works as well so take care k you got talent and hey may be one day you could publish a book or 2 or more and if you do let me know k ill buy a copy
thanks so much... that means alot!!!

Donna McMullin said:
um i got chapters 1- 17 is there any more then that please let me know this is really good stuff truly send me a message if u update it agene k.
and Im sorry I read that some one gave you a bad review it hurts I know I got quite a few on my poem books that I had published but just do what i do if you can let it just role off k cause really i mean the way i see it you get far more good reviews then bad so u must be doing some thing write and I got a lot of bad reviews and im still writing my poems and have a few other books in the works as well so take care k you got talent and hey may be one day you could publish a book or 2 or more and if you do let me know k ill buy a copy
soon im sorry its just that im working in a haunted house and i have a major game this friday and i have compition saturday


Aimee Cullen AKA Fang said:
Yeah Dani, when are you going to add?
Im not sure i havent checked yet..im rarely on so that sucks :[
well id it is then that would be awsome duh

Aimee Cullen AKA Fang said:
Who knows what goes on inside that amazing persons head, I would just love to understand. But somehow I think she must of been very upset about something, is her storty still up? no, she would of taken it down, oh well. But I think IF it is the Jordan I have on my msn, then I could send her the story Dani and I could write, though I think Dani should read some of my work before he lets me write with him.

Ariana said:
dang
i dont think i got it..OMG wonder if shes ok tho
like what would make her leave u know.

Dani said:
we dont know... she sent out a message saying she was leaving but she wouldnt tell us why... by the time i got it i was not able to say anything to her... or find a way that we could reach her... and im heart broken about it... i at least wanted to say bye
yea prob... sorry but wen i get it done you will be the first to know!!!

Aimee Cullen AKA Fang said:
so that mean si have to wait until next week?

Dani said:
soon im sorry its just that im working in a haunted house and i have a major game this friday and i have compition saturday


Aimee Cullen AKA Fang said:
Yeah Dani, when are you going to add?
im sorry!!! i have it finished but i had to turn it in for a porfolio thing for my wrting class and wen i printed it out i reread it and had a bunch of changes and she still hasnt given them back to us and i never got to make the changes on the computer im soooooooo sorry but im hoping to get them back soon and then i will post them!!! cause i have like three parts done!!! yay!!! but i will get them to you asap!!! sorry for the wait!!!

Aimee Twi-Mafia ;) <3 love u all said:
Dani, I'm still waiting, you need to hurry, or I'm going to forget about you. HA! who am I trying to kid I couldnt forget you ort you're atory if I wanted to.
finally!!!!
oh man.so i went missing due to lack of computer power.got myself a laptop and im good

nice job dani.hope all is well :]
hey dani you ok??
we havent heard from you in forever!!
so so so so so so so so soooooooooooooooooooooo sorry 4 the looooooooooooong wait but here it is!!! hope u guys enjoy!!! tomorrow i will update one part in Danielle's pov!!! love ya'll!!!
please please please comment!!!

Samie’s POV
Chapter 17 part 3- How do I save them all?!

“HEY EVERYBODY GET UP!!!” I screamed, “IT’S SATURDAY!!!” Everyone slowly but surely got up. They all look groggy, except for Lera, who walked up to me and we started jumping up and down together.
“I can’t believe it, I finally get to see Patrick again!” she said after we finished jumping up and down.
“Wow, I know I get to see my Sethy again!” I replied. We got up and put on our bathing suits. Kelly and Katie had matching poke-a-dot bikinis but Kelly had a blue one and Katie had a purple one. Lera’s bathing suit was a tankini that had green stripes and Danielle’s was a bikini that was pink and black with skulls and cross bones on it.
“Samie, I so totally love your tankini. It is soooooo you!!!” Danielle said. My bathing suit was a tankini that was yellow and white; it was a halter top and had swirls on it. I put my cover up on and we headed to Danielle’s car. She had a red convertible mustang. Lera, Katie, and Kelly sat in the back while I was sitting in the passenger seat.
“Omg Danielle, I loooovvveee your car,” I said. We headed to First Beach to meet up with the guys. The wind was blowing though our hair as we headed to La Push. When we got there we saw Seth’s Hummer, Adam’s Charger, and Patrick’s Lincoln MKX. We all piled out of the car and headed to the beach when we saw Adam getting out of his car.

“Danielle, can you come here?” he asked but there was something strange about the way he said it.
“Sure!” she replied in her happy go lucky voice she always used. She walked over to him with a huge smile on her face. She stood on her tip toes to kiss him but he turned his head so she ended up kissing his cheek. Her smile went from being a huge smile to a hurt smile. The rest of the girls and I left them and walked down to the beach. As soon as I saw Seth I took off running and jumped into his arms. Everyone around was laughing and I started laughing as well. Then I look to my right, and Lera was in Patrick’s arms as well. We both got down and started giggling. Everybody that was there the day I went to Sam and Emily’s house was at the beach. Patrick brought a football and the guys started messing around with it, throwing it back and forth. Emily, Lera, and I were talking along with the rest of the girls.

“Wow, Embry is gorgeous!” Katie Said.
“Yea, I know!” replied Kelly, “Want to go talk to him?!”
“Uh… yea!”

They walked over to Embry and started flirting with him, while the rest of the girls and I continued talking.

“… NO! ADAM! PLEASE, PLEASE DON’T LEAVE ME!” Danielle screamed as we heard the roar of his engine, and the squeal of his tires leaving the parking lot. Lera and I looked at each other and then took off running toward the parking lot. Once in the parking lot we saw Danielle on her knees sobbing into her hands. I took her into my arms, and she turned her head into my shoulder.

“Danielle what’s wrong?” Lera asked.
“He… broke… up… with… me?” she said while shaking uncontrollably.
“Why? How? What the crap is wrong with him?” I asked.
“I d-d-don’t k-k-k-k-k-know” she stammered, “I-I-It’s p-p-p-probably me-e-e-e!!!”

While we were helping Danielle, a strange feeling came over me. Something felt off, but I couldn’t put my finger on it. I smelt a familiar but strange scent. It was VAMPIRE! Actually a lot of vampires, I smelled about nine. I passed Danielle to Lera and walked toward the smell. That’s when I saw the white van. It sped into the parking lot and shrieked to a stop. Two men in crimson robes got out and grabbed me, while four other people went for Lera and Danielle.

“WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!” I screamed. One of the vampires put his strong freezing hand over my mouth.
“I don’t care anymore,” I heard Danielle say; “My life is nothing without him.”
“GET YOUR HANDS OFF ME!!!” Lera screamed. They dragged us into the van and slammed the door. They dragged us into the dark van, and the smell of vampire smell was overpowering. I was on the verge of passing out. The last thought that went through my head was I have to get Lera and Danielle out of this! Then it all went black.

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