What do you guys think ?

Ok so I writing a story it kinda just came to me when I was playing guitar and writing a song about how im fighting threw my depression anyways!!lol it was strange I was writing this song then a random image popped into my head hahah so I'm a turn it into a story! Lol it's not a twilight fan fiction but year it's kinda like it I guess it's werewoofs In it :D well hope u like eit!

I felt it happening the change, no one should go threw it all the first time is the hardest I tried to stop it but I couldn't it was to late. . I crumpled up on the ground withering in pain screaming. I could feel my bones cracking getting larger. Shaping themselves into formation clothes ripping as it happened it was excruciating. My whole body starting sprouting fur it felt like needles pushing threw my skin. my hands and feet started cracking their bones snapping into paws. I let out yet another blood gurgling scream as a tail grew the pain was unbearable I grew dizzy I started seeing black dots I was so close to passing out I thought I was going to die.

But it stopped I had made it! the pain was gone I felt the best I have ever felt in the whole of my 16 years. . My hearing was impeccable I could hear a deer drink out of the river about 500m to my right. I could hear the leaves wisp around it hitting its hoofs . My eye sight was crystal clear like looking threw the best HD camera in the world I could see for miles. I looked down at a puddle i saw my wolf for the first time I was pure white every where except for a black tip on my left ear. My eyes crystal blue. I looked amazing!!!

I let out a joyful yelp as I swished my tail and pranced a little, then let into a full out run. I felt my legs stretching as I picked up speed dodging trees jumping over logs and scatted woodland,I could feel my paws push into the dirt with each stride I took. I felt as if I could run for miles.

I sensed something behind me, i halted to a stop and crouched down , I snarled looking around in circuls trying to figure were the sound was comming from.
As I turned around something slammed into me then darkness.

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Permalink Reply by Team Edward scince 1901 on June 27, 2012 at 6:29pm

I know da feeling :)

Mrs. Cameron Mitchell said:

Oh you best believe! I'm gonna be like dead from it tomorrow.

Team Edward scince 1901 said:
HAHAHA lol rebel over here!! :p

Mrs. Cameron Mitchell said:
I do rebel my doctor's orders though. He's Russian and name's vladamir!! :D he said don't work yourself too hard because since it's your lower back, everything you do agitates it, I did a 40min workout that was super intense. My back hates me now, but my hips, glutes, and legs thank me.

Team Edward scince 1901 said:
Wow I hope u gunna be ok. Ive just been playing music making music listen to music lol it's help me get threw my depression it like makes me happy

Mrs. Cameron Mitchell said:
Other than that I have physical therapy from my injuries in the car accident I was in. When my head hit the back of the front seat, it gave me a concussion and compressed my spine so I have back problems now. What have you been up to lately?