I want to Esme Isle, the wedding, and Bella's transition into being a vampire. I would like part 1 to end when Bella opens her eyes for the first time after being turned....
Permalink Reply by Liz on October 7, 2010 at 8:18am
I'd like to see PART 1 end right when Bella opens her eyes after changing. I believe that would a very dramatic ending, almost like the end of New Moon.
I want to see everything! lol. I am rereading it right now & don't know what would be cut. I definitely want to see Bella's "before" car, the Wedding, Isle Esme, more of Seth (the BEST werewolf!), Bella as a vamp & her first hunt, & the cottage Bella gets for her B-day. (That's where I"m at in the book right now.)
I think a good ending for part 1 would be Edward fighting to keep Bella alive & Jacob imprinting on Renesmee. I think not knowing if Bella lives is a really good cliffhanger. (So basically the end of Jacob's book.) I think part 2 should start with Bella as a vamp. Kind of like it's the start of her immortal life with Edward.