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Comment by little monster on February 20, 2011 at 12:57pm

well yet is a better word 4 it

 

Comment by little monster on February 20, 2011 at 12:57pm

here's a song i wrote 4 my band that never happened. it's called "Devil in Disguise"

"hey hey, are you having fun

you're a lier

you're a cheater

you're a devil in disguise

do u gotta b perfect

the one that's always right

so come on, come on, come on

let's rewind, rewind, rewind

back to the time when u were mine

well well, do u hate me now

i'm a lier

i'm a cheater

i'm a devil in disguise

chorus

oh no

we're falling

fallig deep in the darkness

beneath our feet

do we gotta b perfect

the ones that r always right

so come on, come on, come on

let's rewind, rewind, rewind

back to the time when u were mine"

Comment by Flavy (ms.cookies) on February 12, 2011 at 7:54pm

wow u guys r good in making spng...i cant write a song but i love to sing

Comment by TwilightTrinity AKA Shaun on December 17, 2010 at 4:25pm

I wrote something when my five yr old nephew drowned this past June. But before I show it to everyone,I kinda have to explain a few lines.Everytime Seth would fall or get hurt,he would just get up,brush himself off and say "I'm alright, I'm okay." He never used to cry.Which is strange for a five yr old. Also,there was something he would always do that we called "googly eyes" where he would smile and bat his eye lashes.Anyway, here it is.

“I’m Alright,I’m okay” By Shaun Ruiz. Dedicated to my nephew Seth

Tearfully we watched you
As you slowly slipped away
Although it hurt to see you go
We could not make you stay
A golden heart stopped beating
A joyful smile at rest
God broke our hearts to prove
He only takes the best
You brightened up the darkest day
When you flashed those “googly eyes”
It put a smile on our face
When it hurt too much to cry
Now, when we see your picture
You look back at us and say
“Don’t cry I’m here with Jesus
I’m alright, I’m okay” .

Comment by u dont need to know my name on December 5, 2010 at 1:24pm

hello i love singing and listening to music and i would like to write a song but idk where to start someone help me plz

Comment by TAYLOR!(: on December 1, 2010 at 9:13am

it feels like when i'm alone my world falls even more apart, my heart breaks into a million pieces i die a little more each time and i'm lost in someone idk anymore, i'm not me i'm someone else, more like noone i'm lost on a never ending road of hurt, empty hearts, empty places, explanations why, each tear i cry the more the silent i become. i didn't know your heart could feel so empty but so heavy with pain at the same time..

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Comment by TwilightTrinity AKA Shaun on October 22, 2010 at 12:41am

I wrote that after a very difficult personal experience I went through.I hope it helps others going through whatever they are going through

Comment by TwilightTrinity AKA Shaun on October 22, 2010 at 12:35am

“Sin for Salvation”
Sometimes temptation is like a stray
You feed it once and never goes away
Before I knew it, I wasn't who I was before
And all I knew was wrong
Didn't seem wrong anymore

Till, one day, I realized
I'd weaved a web I couldn't break
And the weight I put upon myself
Became too much for me to take

Chorus:
Somewhere in the distance
I could hear You call my name
Saying there’s still hope for me
And its not too late to change
But sin for salvation seems
Like such an unfair trade
Why should You have had to die
For the mistakes I’ve made


I found myself divided
By the spirit and the flesh
Undecided whether I should go
To the right or to the left
I kept thinking back
On the life I'd lived
And asking, "Are my many sins
Too many to forgive?"

2nd Chorus:Even after all I’d done
And it seemed all hope was lost
You gave up your divinity
And said “I’ll pay the cost”
You transformed yourself from lion
To the sacrificial lamb
To pay the price of my salvation
Unworthy as I am


Now I come before You broken, Lord
To lift this burden off of me
And to show You I am still the man
That You meant for me to be

I want to live a life that's worthy
Of the price You paid
And to show You that Your
Sacrifice was not in vain

2nd Chorus:Even after all I’d done
And it seemed all hope was lost
You gave up your divinity
And said “I’ll pay the cost”
You transformed yourself from lion
To the sacrificial lamb
To pay the price of my salvation
Unworthy as I am

You took the form of flesh
And died upon the tree
No greater love has been displayed
As the love you showed for me that day on Calvary

Repeat 1st Chorus

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