*I just want to say thanks to everyone for all the support and comments

and I hope you enjoy this part as much as the rest.*

 

 

 

 

  We were walkiing down the beach when I carelessly triped over a rock. Jamie caught me before I hit the ground.The beach is where we spent most of our time together. We kept walking after a few moment we noticed Sam. He was the leader of the pack.He looked very upset. We walked over to him.

  "Sam what's wrong?"Jamie asked

  "Can I talk to you" he said and pulled him farther away from me. He started to talk to Jamie in a wisper. I could only hear a few words witch was "Paul" and "Embry" and something about a fight, so I was guessing it was something about paul losing his temper and getting into a fight with Embry. Jamie walked back over to me when I looked at his face I saw concern and anger in his excpression.

  "what wrong?"I asked

  "nothing" no way was there nothing wrong.

  "what happen-"

  "lets not talk about it yet" he cut me off. I noticed he said yet so I guessed that ment he would tell me later he put his arm around my waist and we walked off the rest of the day he was silent i talked a little and he would just nodd or shake his head when nesscesry. He was thinking about something very hard and I was very curious.

  "Are you going to tell me now?"I asked at the end of the night.

  He did answer me "It's late you should get home"I was confused so I just nodded.

  He drove me home not saying one word he walked me to the door that's when he'd usally kiss me goobye and leave insetd he asked

  "Can I come in? I dont think your moms home."

  "sure'" he walked in with me. I was going to go straight to the couch but a red flashing light on the home phone caught my eye.There was a message. I looked at the caller ID it was the hospitale. Jamie was looking over my shoulder

  "Its probely about missed cheak-ups or something who cares lets watch TV"It made me curios he sounded like he was persuading me not to open it or mabey my imagination was running wild again.

  "I sould still listen to it though"I pressed the button.

  I listen to the nures voice in horror. I couldn't wrap my head around what she was saying. My mom was in a coma I kept listening to see the resaon she was in this condition.

  "It seems like an animal attack the doctors are guessing a bear attack"The nurse said. I felt like someone had just kicked me in the stomach. I held on the counter for support once I herd bear attack I thought of werewolfs my mom was hicking today.

   "was it a bear?"I asked jamie. I got the feeling todays behavior had something to do with this

he looked down

  "well was it?" i said my voice grew louder" tell me" I had tears in my eyes

  "Today embry got on pauls nerves and you know how paul is so when they were fighting your mom was hiking and you can guess what happened they cause praticly knock over trees whene there fighting so they probely did notice her"

  "You knew didnt you"I accused"Sam at the beach that what got you upset, didnt it" I was getting angery why would he hide this from me?

  "why didn't you tell me"but I was so furous I didnt give him a chance to talk.

  "GET OUT" I said crying
  he blinked in suprize"what lets talk-"

  "GET OUT NOW" i tryed soving him out the door"LEAVE"he didnt  move an inch.

  He reached his hand out to try to cupp my face. I slaped it away and cryed harder. That did it. Pain twisted his face

  "I'll go if want me too"He said and walked out the door. I slamed the door behind him and fell to the ground. I started too breakdown crying but I couldnt stay here for long I had to see my mom. I got the key to my car and rushed out the door.

  I went to the hospital my mom looked worse than I thought she had a big cut on right hip and I looked like a big cut on her head.I sat with her for abotu 2 days...

 

 

 

  I sat on the chair and thought to myself. There was a knock on the door the nurse announced there was visitors. It was Paul and Embry they came in I looked at them

  "Hey guys"

  "hey"they looked at my mom"How is she"paul asked

  "she fine the doctors dont know how long it will take her to wake up"

  "were realy sorry" they both said

  "its okay i know it was an accident"

  We were silent for a moment.

  "He was goin to tell you but he thought youd hate him being a werewolf that you would see him as a monster but he was going to tell you trust me he was"Paul said breaking the silence.

  "He's heartbokent"Embry said

  "What?"I said shocked

  "he won't talk to any one and he hasnt left his room once"

  "he's in pain?"I said horrified that I was the one to cause him pain.

they both nodded there head

  oh no. How could I do this? He was hurting because of me. He had a good reason for not telling me and he never mean to cause me pain. I got up

  "He's at his house"I cheak

they nodded agian

  "I'm going to go talk to him"

  I drove to jamies house as quick as I could I knocked on the door Jamies father answered
  "He's in his room"

  "thanks" I walked right passed him and opened jamie door .Jamie was on his bed his face buried in his pillow. He wasnt wearing a shirt as usal

  "Jamie"

  He rolled over to look at me I took one look at his face. He looked like he had been crying alot. I felt like crulest person on earth.

  "I'm sorr-"No I would not let him apolgize I sould be the one saying sorry I put my hands on both sides of his face and look into his eyes

  "No,I'm sorry. I was cruel to you and I sould have talk to you first I am so very sorry"There were tears streaming down my face.He sat up and pulled me across his lap he held me close to his chest. He wiped the tears from my face and stroked my hair repeatidly.

  "I love you"I wispered

  "I love you" He said and kissed me softly on the lips.

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thats sweet i like it. [:
aaawwwwwweeee thats sooo sweet i still love it.. thanx again 4 the update. :) plz keep me updated...
OMG!!!! so sweet!!!! :D

Keep coming, niecey!
this is awesome i like it. keep on. Missed you already lil sis.
take care
wow! this story is awesome and you're getting better everyday but i want you to consider these few points when writing a story.
1. you should let us know why u love him so much although u know he is a werewolf. they can be dangerous when they get angry.
2. always check your spellings, puntuatio marks and grammer.
3. don't forget you're writing a wonderful story so always think u're a proffesional writer
4. mention the name anytime you intoduce a new person and how he/she is related to the characters in the story and the story itself. hope this help. have anice day
i'll do that but im having troble thinking of a name for her got and ideas?? ill try to use those points in part 8
thanx sis

Nana Adwoa said:
wow! this story is awesome and you're getting better everyday but i want you to consider these few points when writing a story.
1. you should let us know why u love him so much although u know he is a werewolf. they can be dangerous when they get angry.
2. always check your spellings, puntuatio marks and grammer.
3. don't forget you're writing a wonderful story so always think u're a proffesional writer
4. mention the name anytime you intoduce a new person and how he/she is related to the characters in the story and the story itself. hope this help. have anice day
thanx u all for readin my story
wow!thats sweet !
wow it is awsome i liked it

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