Broken Heart

One day I saw you

I thought I was dreaming

You were the most beautiful boy I’d ever seen

Every day I was waiting for you

Waiting if you would come for lunch at the cafeteria

Waiting if you would come to the classes we have together

But since our first day you wouldn’t come

I was starting to get over you

To think about some other things not just thinking about you

But then you came

I was walking into the cafeteria and I saw you

My heart was jumping out of my chest

I wanted to go to you

I wanted to touch you

But what I was seeing then

Would change everything I was living for in the last days

You were sitting there

Holding hands with her

She was really beautiful

Blond thin and tall

The next day the news paper published this story:

“Seventeen year old girl died of a broken heart”

Replies to This Discussion

Permalink Reply by Malin Cullen Salvatore on March 20, 2010 at 2:59pm

OME Selma!! This whas sooo beautifull!! you are really, really, good :) the last line was really sad..OME it started beautifl, and it ended beautiful ;) you should write more poems, I would like to read more! I whas thinkig of Edward when i read this poem ^^, did you when you wrote it? :)

Love you, great job, i love it! /twinsis Malin

Permalink Reply by Adina on March 21, 2010 at 6:24am

wow..it's really beautiful and sad.It's like Bella was thinking to Edward ,you know,in the cafeteria .Bella was always thinking that she didn't look like a girl from Arizona,like you said here :'blond thin and tall' It's sad when a boy just look for a beautiful and sexy girl ,not for her soul ,for what she thinks.I'm glad that Edward was thinking that Bella looks like a normal girl,at first.But when he found somethings about her, he was in love by her beauty and her soul,he heart.
In just a few words =) ,your poem it's great!

Permalink Reply by SeLma Cullen Salvatore on March 21, 2010 at 6:42am

aww thank you hon...this means really much for me..=)

Permalink Reply by Jamie Lynn on March 21, 2010 at 8:28pm

Creative, Selma! It's not typical poetry but i do like it. It has sentiment and meaning. There are people that go through this kind of thing and it's tragic.

Permalink Reply by Veronika Ivanelova on March 22, 2010 at 3:00am