Jacob and Nessie.
No copyright infringement intended. Characters are Stephanie Meyers.


Part 1 =)
I smiled at Jake. Flowing out of the all girls school I attended were waves of hundreds of very pretty girls but the only one he seemed to have eyes for was me. He smiled back when I was stood next to him.
Behind Jake stood, rather gloriously, the sleek black bike which was proudly gaining the disapproval of the fathers that waited to collect their daughters. That disapproval was nothing compared to the looks me and jake were getting from the other parents though.
I couldn't really blame them much, i was fifteen, looking seventeen and Jacob was sixteen, looking twenty three.
'Does my dad know you're taking me home on the bike?' I asked him, a teasing edge to my voice.
'Erm...well not exactly.' He muttered shuffling his feet nervously.
I laughed. Jacob was getting really good at controlling his thoughts around my father these days. That may come in useful, I thought as my mind conjured the image of the two of us. Alone.
'Ness. Nessie!'
I blinked in confusion, back from my dreamstate.
'You were off all alone on your own little planet.' Jacob chuckled.
'Well i wasn't exactly alone.' I whispered, blushing.
I think he blushed too but I wasn't sure because his skin was so dark.
'Oh,' he said,'Well I said do you want to go back to your mom and dads or to the main house?'
'The main house, please.'
His nose wrinkled a little. Even after all this time the smell of vampires burned his nostrils like the smell of vegetables burned mine.
He lifted me up onto the back of the bike and held out the helmet for me to grab.
'Hell no!' I pictured in my head then pressed my hand to his face so he could hear it too.
'Why?' He whispered, confused.
'It's absolutely hideous, that's why.'
'Please, Nessie. I am already going to lose one arm for bringing the bike.'
I grudgingly put the helmet on my head but not before giving Jake a cold look. I looked like an idiot.
As we flew across the snow covered lands of Alaske on the bike, I pressed myself closer to Jacob. He wasn't much warmer then me but I liked being closer to him regardless.
I pressed my handto his warm neck softly and visualized the words, 'Can we go to your house for a bit?'
Well house was a bit of a stretch, but it had the basics; living room, kitchen, bathroom and bedroom. Esme had put a king-size bed in there because ' Jacob was so tall.' I could think of better purposes for it though.
I felt Jake shrug and instead of going straight ahead, he turned left onto the dirt path.


Part 2 =)
The little house came into view as the bike roared its way along the dirt path. It camouflaged in with the trees because of the light brown color but still it was easy to spot.
The bike jerked a little as we stopped and nearly toppled over when I feebly attempted to get off it. I prised the helmet off my head and twisted round to face Jake. He looked at my hair and laughed. I checked my hair in the wing mirror of the bike and cursed. I looked like some psychotic bird, all the feathers out of place.
I stomped up the path to the house, aiming to find my hairbrush in the bedroom as quick as I could.
After I had straightened out the nest on my head, I rifled through the closet searching for something more comfortable to wear. Alice had dressed me this morning.
I found some faded jeans but no tops, so I pulled out a brown tee of Jakes and threw it on.
I walked out the door and through the corridor into where Jacob was lounging on the sofa.
‘Nice t-shirt. Are you trying to be me?’ Jake commented when I came into view.
‘Nah,’ I replied. ‘If I was you I would have to do this,’ I flexed my non-existent bicep but he got the idea.
‘I want that t-shirt back you know.’ He said while laughing.
‘What, now?’ I asked and chuckled when his eyes popped open wide when I began to pull the t-shirt up my waist. I only let it go past my belly-button and pulled it back down laughing at the expression on his face.
‘You aren’t going to be laughing so hard if your dad sees what you just done in my thoughts.’
I scowled at him. He was not playing fair. However, I liked a competition and wasn’t going to take it lying down.
‘Well let’s see if my dad likes the thoughts running through your mind when I do this.’ I whispered.
I kissed him. It’s not like I would not have done it, even if it was just to win the argument. My dad was long forgotten. Jake didn’t hesitate to kiss me back, I was winning. I had to pause for breath; extra vampire-like abilities didn’t give me the power of not needing oxygen.
But the erm ... thoughts I was meant to give him, turned into more than just thoughts and my so far boring day; turned into an absolutely brilliant day.


Part 3 =)
No. No. No. No. No. No. No. No. No. No. No. No. No. No. No. No. No. No! Him and my MOTHER! What the hell!
“Nessie wait up a sec.”
I pushed myself harder sprinting through the trees.
“Nessie I will easily catch up if I phase.”
Phase then dog.
“Please will you hold on and hear me out?”
I came to an abrupt stop and Jake skidded to a halt beside me.
“Thank you.”
“Hurry up before I break your hind legs.” I whispered furiously, putting as much venom as I could in the words.
He looked really hurt but the anger and hurt I felt drowned out the guilt.
“It isn’t like it sounds. Really.” He pleaded.
“How can KISSING SOMEONE’S MOTHER MEAN SOMETHING ELSE !”
“It was ages ago Ness, before you were born obviously.”
“Oh, I feel so special.” I said sarcastically.
“You should.” Jake wrapped his arms around me and held me tightly to his chest. My resolve was crumbling immediately. I had to get away.
“Let go o...” I looked up intending to give him a cold look, but his face was closer than I expected. His nose touched mine.
“It was long ago. It’s not important. Okay.”
“No, it’s not okay.” His hot breath covered my face and heated my cold cheeks.
“I want to go to the big house now, please.”
“Alright, one minute.” Jake was heading to the bushes to take off his jeans and attach them to his leg.
“What is the point in going behind a tree now? I have seen everything now, haven’t I?” I raised my eyebrows at him.
He was just about to take off his pants and destroy my anger at him and my mom, when a loud cough sounded from behind me.
“I know I said it doesn’t do anything for me Jacob but could you still get changed somewhere else.” Leah said, emerging from the shrubs with Seth, Quil and Embry beside her. The pack was complete.
Leah never had like me. I had never liked her either.
“Hey half-a-leech what’s up.”
“Guess.” I said maliciously my eyes narrowing slightly at her appearance. She wore a tight vest top that showed off how slim she was and short cropped jeans.
She smiled at my response.
It was no secret that she had a thing for Jacob. Sharing a pack mind and all that. Jacob had told me one day what she thought despite the Sam situation and although he imprinted on me it didn’t help with the jealousy. She would always know him better than I would.
Embry coughed nervously and stepped forward and greeted me. “Hey Ness. How you doing?”
Ignoring the murderous glare Leah was giving me and Embry I said hello back.
I hugged Quil and Seth and turned back to Jake.
“I need to go back Jake.”
He sighed in relief that my tirade was over .For now anyway.
Leah huffed and stomped into Jake’s house, but Seth and the rest of the pack stayed where they were. Courteously turning their heads when Jake got changing. Jacob smiled at the smug expression that I knew was on my face.


Part 4 =)

I stormed up the path to the big house. I was concentrating on Jacob’s face so that Dad would not know that I was going to have a go at mom. I shoved open the door and squeezed past Aunt Rose to stomp up to my room. Mom quickly followed ignoring my Dad’s warning to leave me alone, ‘She needs some space.’
“What’s up baby, something to do with Jacob?” She asked as I slammed my bedroom door out of my way.
“Go away.”
I turned to look at her and she looked confused.
“Go away.” I repeated.
I heard her turn and walk out of the room, and then Aunt Alice and Rose creep in after her. My dad had obviously told them what I had found out and now was probably informing my mum now of the issue.
“It was so long ago Nessie they didn’t know you were even going to exist then.”
I sat in silence, no intention of talking.
“Oh, and by the way hun you kinda let your dad know a bit too much about what you and Jake did earlier. Just warning you he is not happy.”
My mind drifted back to the once fantastic afternoon that had abruptly turned sour. One; I had found out my boyfriend once, no twice made out with my mum. Not brilliant news. Two; Leah had turned up. I didn’t exactly feel like celebrating. Three; I had to come back here and deal with it. Woo.
I grabbed a few tops, a hoodie and some jeans from my drawers and shuffled past Rosalie. I turned the door handle and walked out the house not caring if my dad knew where I was going or not. Once out the house I started running as fast as I could to Jake’s, it was only a few miles away so it would not take me long to get there if I really pushed myself.
I slowed down when I got nearer to Jake’s house because I could hear arguing; it didn’t take me long to identify them as Jacob and Leah.
“What did you think you were doing?!”I heard Jake yell.
“Sorry, chill.”
“You best hope Renesmee doesn’t find you after she find out you tried to kiss me.”
I balled up my fists and scrunched up my eyes in an attempt to stop the anger before it got too overwhelming to control.
“Why what is she going to do?” Leah sneered.
“Well you’re about to find out.” I said emerging from behind a tree.
When I saw her a strange red haze covered my eyes and the anger I felt towards her became uncontrollable.

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The end of Part 5 =)

I looked into his eyes for what felt like an eternity; the deep earth colour of them giving me an insight into his soul. Everything between us was replayed during that long glance. Me and him together, him alone, me smiling so sheepishly with a blush in my cheeks, him with his wolf brothers stood protective with me and my family. Against the Volturi. Comrades.
A powerful fire burned from my legs upwards ending in a feiry surge in my face as the day at Jake's played like a film in my head. We had merged together that day, we were no longer two seperate entities, we were one moulded person. Sculpted together through some serious mistakes in fate.
My feelings towards him accelarated and overcame my entire body.
Then a different fire worked it's way through my blood. It felt like all my veins had been set alight. I couldn't breathe. My lungs had blocked off completely. I choked on the remainder of air in my throat. I blacked out.
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Part 6 =D

I was fading. I was losing myself and I didn't een know what to. The fire was powerful but when I managed to prise the answer out of mum to how it felt when she transformed in to a vampire she said it was like she was being obliterated into ash; this didn't feel like that though. I was dangerously hot, but all I could think of was Jacob, Jacob, Jacob of how my last normal moments had been me remembering everything that had put us together and how I thought I had fallen for him; quite literally.
I was startled when I realised I could hear some fuzzy voices.
I thought I could make out Jake's voice and my dads. Arguing.
"You..."The voice faded," She loves you thats what..." That's what??
"You don't think.." Everything went fuzzy,"Love her!"
My head felt like soggy mash. Useless. Although slowly things were getting clearer, everything was just as normal as before. I could smell and hear just the same as before.
I snapped my eyelids open and stared full on into the combind tree faces of Jake, my dad and my mom. They looked like one giant three headed creature, I thought I was hallucinating.
"Are you okay?" All three heads synchronized in questioning me.
"I'm..." I stopped short, my voice sounded different. Weird.
"Yeah it might take some getting used to even though it wasn't that different to what you was before.
I looked at my hands and legs. They were differnent too, what the hell was going on.
"Your feelings for Jacob were too much for a half human- half vampire child, so your body had to change, human or vampire and because Jake is more closer to human than vampire, you body is human now but your hearing and eyesight are slightly more clearer." Dad whispered with a slightly pained look on his face.
I glanced again at my hands, darker in colour to what they was before. This was very very weird, but in a way I was slightly relieved I was near enough normal now. I didn't have to worry when someone at school cut themselves that I would be tempted to bite them.
Jake smiled at me and I grinned at him but as my eyes flipped back to dad's expression when he told me I was human I realised why he looked so sad when he told me.
I was human, so I would only live the life span of a human, I would die when I was eighty or ninety. I also smelled as delicious as any other human.
"I smell appealing to you all now don't I?"
Dad gave a forced smile. "A bit but because you were part vampire you don't smell too much like a human, and combined with the wet dog smell you always will have clinging to you; I don't think we have to worry that much."
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Part 7 =)

I smiled contentedly as i rummaged through the fridge for chocolate bars that my body wanted and wouldn't reject now. I needed to prepare myself for the family gathering that was about to take place. We were all here to discuss my future because it seemed apparant that my humaness, may cause 'some issues' for the Volturi.
I wandered into the dining room where all of my family, Jake and a very uncomfortable Sam were seated.
I sat down and stuffed the chocolate bar in my mouth awaited Grandad Carlisle to start talking.
"I think we all remember the last time the Volturi paid our combined family a visit," He nodded graciously towards Jacob as a low growl came from his direction,"And that could cause some issues as they could perceive Nessie as a human who knows too much about our kind-"
"But you wouldn't reveal secrets of your own family!" Jake cut in; much to the annoyance of Aunt Rose.
"I know," Grandad continued, "However the Volturi see a lot of things differently to us and that could cause problems, we didn't leave things on a happy note the last time they visited and I am sure they would not mind returning to pick out another problem."
"If they decide to come again I will see and we could call on all the other covens and the nomads again." Aunt Alice chirped in.
"There is however another slightly more sensitive approach. She could also become a vampire."
Jake and my dad simultaneously jumped up, feral snarls eminating from each of them louder than thunder.
"STOP!!" Alice screamed.
Dad's snarling stopped and he went rigid. When he spoke the words were cold and rushed, "The Denali's are on their way, some of the nomads are being killed by the Volturi for standing against them. The Irish and Egyptian covens are also on their way they are in hiding now from the Volturi. Looks like we have to fight now, whether we like it or not."
Part 8 =)

Preparations had to made.
S*** we only had a week to prepare. The Amazons, Denali's, Irish and Egyptian covens had arrived. Carlisle had literally ran to the airport to get a flight to warn the Amazon coven. Nomads were being rounded up like sheep to stand against the Volturi and this time- even dispite the help of Siobhan trying to wish there was no fight everyone was certain that the Volturi were not going to back down.
I wasn't told any of this obviously I had to eavesdrop on all the coversations that they thought I wouldn't hear because I was part human but still my vampire abilities stretched more than Mum and Dad would ever know.
Nahuel had arrived; much to the enjoyable annoyance of Jake. Serves him right for the whole kissing my mum thing that I couldn't forget even if I wanted to. I did kinda flirt with Nahuel, even though I knew it was wrong and the plain jealousy on Jake's face made Dad skake his head at me, telling me to stop even though he did agree with my motives- and knew this was my way of making Jacob pay.
Nahuel spoke of how he had to travel down with the Volturi to testify against Joham's superhuman race wishes. They hardly even cared what Joham's defence was. They made Jane punish him with the painful power of her mind and then Felix and Demetri ripped him to pieces and took pleasure in burning him to a weak pile of ashes. Nahuel was then reluctantly was allowed to go free and he said that Caius promised to see him again, which then convinced him to go into hiding.
4 days left until the Volturi came.
The wolves were on edge again there was well over twenty of them now, the biggest pack known in the Quileutes ancestry. Jacob kept himself to himself and came only irregularly to see me, as I was now grounded for what I did with him.
2 days left till the Volturi came.
Mum and Dad's cottage was eventually full so very, very, very reluctantly Dad let me go stay at Jacob's house.
I took two suitcases to Jake's which sparked the comment from Emmett,
" Want us to rent a crane to take them to Jacob's or get a removal truck?"
" I dunno how about an armwrestle with Mum to decide it. I bet I know who's gunna win!" Ha. There that shut him up.

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It was today. The big fight. Mum had warned to me to stay away but as Jake was waiting in the field with the others there was no-one to watch me. I had inherited mum impatience for not wanting to stand around and wait to see if any of my family were being injured.
I made my way up through the woods around 30 miles north of La Push. I could tell I was close because I could hear snarls not far away and shouting.
I remembered that right about now I would be in range for Dad to hear my thoughts. I tried to shout at him, 'I am human so as soon as I step into that clearing the Volturi will be caught off guard by thirst that can give you time to attack. Get Jake to howl when you want me to come nearer.'
I knew it was a long shot that Dad would want me to get involved but I knew it was a good plan and so should he.
I waited for around 10 minutes in the forest waiting for a signal I was needed.
"Tanya!!! NOOOOO!!!" I remembered that Tanya held a deathly grudge against Caius for killing her sister Irene and it looked like she had set out for vengence.
That's when my signal exploded. The deafening howl that sent me sprinting through the trees and bursting through to the open field.
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