Hush child,
the wind can hear... You're whispers are carried, along with your secrets, along with your tears.
Hold shut child,
that voice within... calls upon which one cannot see, allows hurt in.
Close tight child,
for the night can see... But for daylight reveals, the reflections of which the eyes hath seen.
Keep quiet child,
no words needed... for your prayers need no voice to be heard.
Keep to faith child,
all shall clear... Waters of Grace, you take your fill, then go child, on to God's will.
by Vanessa Kemplin

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i sure appreciate how all you people scroll right past my poem without taking a second look. each and every person in this group should at least take one look at all writings from every member of this group, without members , and their writings this group would not exist! think about others sometimes and not just yourselves!

 

Nice poem, I like how all the ellipsis are used to effect! :)
thanks for reading Lauren. I appreciate the compliment

Lauren said:
Nice poem, I like how all the ellipsis are used to effect! :)

That is a very nice poem. The rhythm is kept, which isn't the case with a lot of poetry these days. And it's very expressive.

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