i sure appreciate how all you people scroll right past my poem without taking a second look. each and every person in this group should at least take one look at all writings from every member of this group, without members , and their writings this group would not exist! think about others sometimes and not just yourselves!
Nice poem, I like how all the ellipsis are used to effect! :)
That is a very nice poem. The rhythm is kept, which isn't the case with a lot of poetry these days. And it's very expressive.