Hey, this story is still in prosses. but i wanted an opinion about my work. anyway, pleas comment! 1. Homecoming “Saphira?” I muttered lightly, I felt my lips only twitch. “Mmm?” she snapped looking through her rear mirror to glance at my expression. “Yes?”  I didn’t realize until this moment how hard it would be to ask what I wanted though I could feel my mouth trembling in ach; yearning to hea…