a peom ( for aloved soul)
alot of guys love my poem ( forget him) .i wrote this poem when i saw newmoon:
so i decided to write another one...
i lost my boyfriend this time of year.. he died in a car accident .this poem for him
the pain of misery,the sense of fear,the feelingof loneliness we all just faced
the happiness,the laughs were all far chased
the shock went on before our eyes,the sun once set , would never rise
it cant just go this crazy, weird way
it shouldnt show what people say
life is just a waste of time , it has no meaning , it has no rhyme
he was the one i all just loved, the pain the tears,he once all shoved
i was the one who lost all hope without you i just couldnt cope
i loved the way you made my day
for you,all my prayers i try to say
it is too hard to say goodbye and with my broken wing i try to fly
i have to live with what i have got
i want to say an awful lot.
we all just loved you the way you were
may you rest in peace my love friend
i just didnt want this to be out end
so i decided to write another one...
i lost my boyfriend this time of year.. he died in a car accident .this poem for him
the pain of misery,the sense of fear,the feelingof loneliness we all just faced
the happiness,the laughs were all far chased
the shock went on before our eyes,the sun once set , would never rise
it cant just go this crazy, weird way
it shouldnt show what people say
life is just a waste of time , it has no meaning , it has no rhyme
he was the one i all just loved, the pain the tears,he once all shoved
i was the one who lost all hope without you i just couldnt cope
i loved the way you made my day
for you,all my prayers i try to say
it is too hard to say goodbye and with my broken wing i try to fly
i have to live with what i have got
i want to say an awful lot.
we all just loved you the way you were
may you rest in peace my love friend
i just didnt want this to be out end
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Comment by Milou on October 29, 2010 at 5:47pm -
oh my gosh honey i'm so so sorry for what happened to you...
your poem is wonderful
Wish you the best :)
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Comment by ivy Masen on October 29, 2010 at 11:34pm -
Perhaps it's better in heaven today....
i know its awful but what else can i say
To have you as a good friend
must be a sad terrible but a hopeful end
your brocken Wing may heel again
it will get better but still be pain...
But the pain will always remember you
about the good time that you 2 went trough
<3
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Comment by Alice Jasper Bella Cullen on October 30, 2010 at 1:08am -
Ow my gosh im sorry...but its good that you can express your feelings in a poem...wish you all the best xoxoxox
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Comment by sarah cullen on October 30, 2010 at 9:26am -
thanks
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Comment by Rosalie Hale on November 21, 2011 at 1:04pm
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I am sorry for what happened to you! I know i dont know him or you and you dont know me or he doesnt know me but here is a tip. Imagine that he is there right by your side at all times! That is what I did for my dog but it will still work for a human because still to this day I imagine my Aunt Judy tanding right by me all the time.
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