hey!
this is my 1st post here...
i've been getting a lot of criticism lately from alot of ppl bcoz of my Robsession ;)
so, i wrote a poem about hw i feel about tht. hope u all like it!!!

One wish upon a star,
One look that takes you so far,
Eyes deeper than sea,
Wish they’d be looking at me,
Wonder how it’d feel,
If it was real,
If my dreams came true,
Wonder what I’d do,
If the fiction became a fact,
How would I react?
If he took me in his arms,
If he dazzled me with his charm,
If he kissed me just one kiss,
In that moment what could I miss?
If I had him by my side,
All that world so wide,
Would mean nothing next to him,
The sun itself would look dim,
Though it really can’t be,
And his princess can never be me,
It doesn’t hurt to hope and pray,
So I keep dreaming no matter what they say!

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Comment by Amy Eng on April 13, 2010 at 10:15am
plz guys comment on the poem..i wanna kno wut u think of it!!!
Comment by Gizz on April 13, 2010 at 12:34pm
WOW REALLY COOL IF YOU DID THIS ON YUR OWN WHICH I NEVER CAN ;) VERY NICLEY WRITTERN HOPE YU DO SUM MORE STUFF WOW IM GNA TAKE THIS INTO SCHOOL AND SAY ID DONE IT LOL THAT WOULD BE JOKES TAHNKZZ XX
Comment by Amy Eng on April 13, 2010 at 12:37pm
yeah i wrote it myself! i've been writing since i was 14
n' am so glad u liked it!!! u can tell ur friends u wrote it i dont mind, just make sure they dont read this blog lol
thnx :)))
Comment by Gizz on April 13, 2010 at 12:40pm
LoL How Old are you now ? Lol Thankz but once there surprised il burst the bubble and say i found it on twifans theyll probaly add you as a friend too :D thankzz
Comment by Amy Eng on April 13, 2010 at 12:52pm
am 22 nw!!!
lol i meant 2tell u tht its ok 2use it i dont mind!!!
n' thnx 4adding me as a friend!
Comment by Gizz on April 13, 2010 at 12:53pm
No problem :)
Comment by Taylor C on April 13, 2010 at 3:01pm
you know this is exactly how i feel about rob.. I think YOU'RE the mind reader xD jk AWESOME poem gonna be a favorite
Comment by VampLovingNana on April 13, 2010 at 3:19pm
Very very nice! Your poem reflects girls and women from ages 6 - 60! I should know - I'm 60 lol. Keep up the good work!
Comment by Marisa on April 13, 2010 at 3:35pm
You have a talent!! Express yourself, and keep writing!
Comment by Mad about Rob on April 13, 2010 at 4:10pm
I love it ! I feel the same way , ahhh if only ....

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