Blood Promise
Prologue
As I stared into the eyes of the slayer, my partner passed out closed behind me, I couldn’t help but see my
recent life flashing before my eyes. I saw my first day at the Academy. I saw
the day Arista and I bonded. I saw my first lesson and I saw – what was most
likely – my last lesson.
I saw Matthew.
I saw my first love.
I saw my first date.
I saw my first kiss.
Matthew and I were about to die. I could see it. It was an incontrovertible fact. I could see it in the
bloodthirsty eyes of the slayer. I could see it in the way my hands were
shaking uncontrollably. I could see it in the blood pouring out of Matthew’s wounds.
If a miracle happened and I could defeat the slayer on my own, the blood loss
would definitely kill him first. I couldn’t even get close enough to heal his
wounds either.
I dropped to my knees in defeat. This was one situation I couldn’t get out of on my own, and my only back up was
thousands of miles away in a safe castle. It was all I could do not to just
break down and start crying.
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Comment by Alice Jasper Bella Cullen on October 12, 2010 at 11:19pm -
omg that looks good..is that a book or did u make it up?
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Comment by Rachel on October 13, 2010 at 1:22am -
Yeah... this is good writing... I guess you're trying to do something with a raw story in your mind... After all twilight is one story that has inspired many many upcoming writers... Go on and continue being creative... let your imagination go wild... I am sure, if you continue writing, you will be successful one day. Cheers!!
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Comment by Caity Black on October 14, 2010 at 5:48am -
@Alice Jasper Bella Cullen: yeah I made it up, it's something I've been trying to do for a while but I could never get the words to come out right.
@Rachel Arora: thanks a bunch! it means a lot to have positive feed back like this :)
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