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Jake and i got into his ferrari and drove towards the airport


The plane flight wasnt so bad, Jake said i was asleep for most of the trip. I had only just woken up when we were walking along the dock towards jakes new boat. he easily stepped in the boat whilst not only carring me but the bags aswell. He was a tank.

he than placed me in the passangers seat and then started the boat as we took of into the night.

It was about 45 minutes later when i got bored
" Jake? how long to go?"
he looked at the directions on a map, my dad had given him. but then he looked and smiled as he shifted his eyes to what was ahead of us.
Island Esme.

When we arived at the little wooden dock, Jake grabbed all our bags in his left arm and picked me up bridal style in his right. he was so strong!

he walked with me silently throught the low palms and shrubs pushing our way through i was pre occupied just staring at his face, when he looked down and smiled,

"Welcome Home Mrs Renesmee Black"

i looked away from his face to see a massive house, i mean HUGE! it was exactly like the cullens but this house was more beachy but it still had the whole left side of the place made out of glass. this was the side facing the water.

he walked into the house, the lights were allready on waiting for us, we walked through the loungeroom jake dropped out bags there then we walked through the kitchen then to the hallway up the stairs down another hallway and into a white room with a huge White bed it flowed so well.

jake came up behind me wrapping his arms around my waist and nestleing into my shoulders
"So Mrs Black, What Do You Feel Like Doing?"


Cliffhanger hahahahaahahahaha What do you think they will do

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Comment by mark jacobs on January 27, 2010 at 7:06pm
Comment by Lone Nelly on January 28, 2010 at 3:30am
it is pretty good, keep writing and not so many punctuation problems this time. looking forward to the next one. One thing - could you use the same title line every time. Now they are so easy to miss between all the other stuff that is floating around. Something that is easy to recognize. Just a tip. look forward to the next one
Comment by Rose Patterson on February 5, 2010 at 12:00pm
Once again, it is too similar to Edward and Bella's story in Breaking Dawn. They would live completely different lives so try doing something different. Ur story is good though, dont give up, just try and be a bit different.
Can't wait for the next chapter x


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