Ive writen a story about what I think would have happened if Alice was not waiting for Bella after she cliff jumpes. Ive got 8 chapters done and I think Ive done a pretty good job.

Please read my story. And leave comments too, they make me happy:) I promise it will curb your TWILIGHT craving.

Please and Thank you!!


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Comment by MrsTCullen on August 18, 2010 at 4:34pm
Is it Bella & Jacob story?
Comment by Jean on August 18, 2010 at 4:48pm
Well.....I think it is sweet, but it transitions a little too quickly for me. I think that she would beat herself up for kissing Jacob and it would take some time before she would really be able to date him.

I'm ready to hear more though. :)
Comment by Mia on August 18, 2010 at 5:27pm
omg write more!! but have edward come back a little later, cuz that would be cool:)
Comment by TeamEdwardForever<333!!=) on August 18, 2010 at 7:04pm
if it has to do with Jacob and Bella like dating, then im sorry, i can't read it. :(
Comment by Twisage on August 18, 2010 at 9:29pm
Hey it´s pretty good u did a really good job but...please i ca hardly wait to read more!!!
Comment by Isabella Black on August 18, 2010 at 11:23pm
Keep goin its great!! i need more plz!
Comment by MICH! THE JOKER! SETH! on August 19, 2010 at 5:03am
no no no, Bella's supposed to be with Edward and if she can't be then she'd just want to be friends with Jacob for a long while and then they'll start something but then end it cause Bella realises that she still loves Edward. I just can't read something that has something romantic with Bella and Jacob, it's just wrong.. sorry.
Comment by susan mcivor on August 19, 2010 at 5:27am
i agree the whole point to twilight is edward and bella together forever, so i cannot read either.
Comment by ß.Gomez on August 19, 2010 at 6:12am
Let me clear something up, first, the story is no where near done. Second, I am Team Edward. I so agree that is who Bella is suppose to be with. And Bella(in my story) agrees too.
It's okay if you dont read it, you probably wouldnt enjoy it right now. But I promise if you read it when Im done, you just might have a change of heart ;)
Thank you so much, I love the Twilight Saga and Im only writing this story because I cant get these characters out of my head! Thanks for the love and support, and Im working on chapter 9 already. Ill update soon!
Comment by RenezzmeeKarlie on August 19, 2010 at 2:40pm
Amazing!! Speaking for myself, I LOVE IT. I can't get them out of my head either. You did a wonderful job. I thought about it all day at work. Lol. There is something about this story that just keeps me wanting more and more. Right now all I can think about is Why is Jacob staying longer? I think i might no, but Can't wait for an update to see if I was right. Again, Great Job!!


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