My fanfiction .. So far. Just chapter 1. Tell me what you guys think. So far

A New scream
Bellas point of view


The thought
I was blinded by sunlight when i was lying across Edwards perfect, Rippled chest.
"Should we go get Renesmee?" I asked softly. "Yes, Lets go." He said slowly getting
his clothes on. I got off the bed and got my clothes on too. And i followed his toned, Leaned
Body. I grabbed his hand and we walked slowly to Renesmee's room.We didn't have to rush
to do anything. The volturi were gone, They won't bug us anytime soon. Edward And I and
Renesmee, Our beatufil Daughter. And also Jacob can live happy lives. My former
best-friend, And possibly my enemy, But i don't look at it that way. And neither does Jacob.
I knew i as hurting him, But i couldn't do anything. I made my choice, And I wasn't going to change it
and i have no
attention of doing that. Renesmee was awake with her eyelids fluttering when we went to stand
over her bed. "Good Morning, Mom and dad." She said; Her sweet, Innocent voice going off like bells.
"Hi, My Angel." Edward said with his soft, velvet voice. He was grinning. He had the
most beautiful smile. His perfect pearls shining. I smiled and bent down to pick up
Renesmee. I grabbed Edwards hand. And was on our way out the door. I kissed her forehead
and asked " Did you have a good sleep, Honey?". "Yeah, Mommy." Renesmee said her lovely,
musical voice. We jogged up to where my new family was- Carlisie, Esme, Rosalie, Alice, Emmett,
And jasper. My perfect,organized family. Edward grabbed the doorknob and pulled open.
"What were you guyz doing all night !? ." He said chuckling so hard.
Rosalie chuckled under her breath lightly. I growled at Emmett. "I swear, I will rip your
mouth off." .. Renesmee just giggled so cutely and i smiled knowing i was her mother.

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Comment by Jess' Cullen Martins {Dracula} on February 22, 2009 at 2:14pm
God I like it! Can wait for the second chapter!
Continue the good work!
xx
Comment by Yvette on February 22, 2009 at 3:16pm
wow i like it to, you are really good...Brava!!! =)
Comment by ElizabethJaneCullen on February 23, 2009 at 12:33pm
cool! ready for the 2nd! :D
Comment by SierraCullen-EdwardMine^,.,^ on February 23, 2009 at 4:08pm
Thank you so much. Thank you for being supported. ^.^

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