Ok i was trying to sleep last night but couldnt so i decided to write (as you do). It was four in the morning and i hadent slept at all with an exam starting at nine lol. So I was thinking about New Moon as i always am just lately and this is what i came out with. Please dont be mean bear in mind i was sleep deprived and stressed ! Hehe

My life still remains
though my heart is gone,
It left when you left
with you it belongs.

You may no longer love me
but i still need you,
To pick up the pieces
I swear this is true.

You told me to move on
that you had done so,
I will love you forever
No matter where you go.

When you left i died
So painfully too,
My tears they did nothing
my soul didn't pull through

I lie here so broken
far beyond repair,
Praying for an answer
to cease my despair.

The happiness I had
when you were around,
Is what cripples me today
as I cry on the ground.

The truest of loves
eternally lost,
Dieing inside
my heart is tossed.

A flicker of hope
lights up my sky,
Maybe my soul
doesnt have to die.

The Pieces are stiched
but never to heal,
My dreams still haunt me
but better I feel.

His voice is so sweet
inside my mind,
Danger is the key
a miraculous find.

The cliff may seem high
but the water is deep,
His voice begs me no
with that sound I leap.

The death is forseen
a tradegy told,
All to be mistaken
a disater takes hold.

His life now in danger
I can not allow,
To save him i must
though i dont know how.

He had denied
that our love was true,
But without me he couldnt
see a day through.

As we now lay here
eternally together'
His undying love
I trust in forever.

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Tags: Forever, Love, New, Poem, Random, moon

Comment by Fanpire Facinelli (Fanpy) on June 17, 2009 at 2:26pm
aww, love it hattie :)
Comment by Kris]tabella_Torres on June 17, 2009 at 2:32pm
WOW THAT WAS AWESOME!(: I GIVE YOU BIG PROPS FOR THAT!! :D
Comment by Kris]tabella_Torres on June 17, 2009 at 2:33pm
WOW THAT WAS AWESOME!(: I GIVE YOU BIG PROPS FOR THAT!! :D
Comment by Lindsey on June 17, 2009 at 3:38pm
i very much like it :D
Comment by Alice_cullen-hale21[team BATMAN] on June 17, 2009 at 4:28pm
it was really really good (:
Comment by Kristen_Elaine on June 17, 2009 at 4:29pm
I love it! :)
Comment by SacredSilence {Team Batman} on June 17, 2009 at 5:23pm
OMG thats brilliant! Love Love Love it! <3

You should get it published ;oD

Xxxx
Comment by jasmine Black on June 17, 2009 at 5:32pm
This is so good i love it!!!!!!!!!!! i give 10 Stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comment by Brandy Oatley on June 17, 2009 at 9:00pm
That was really pretty. I loved it.

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