Sheena & Stina's Fan Fiction of the Week: 'Spiral Static'

Welcome to Sheena and Stina's Fan Fiction of the Week. Each week we'll review a piece of Twilight fan fiction, giving you our opinions and rating it on a scale of one to 10 fangs with one fang being a dud and 10 being absolutely dazzling. If you'd like us to review a piece of fan fiction, please send it to us by posting the link here as a comment, and by all means tell us what you think of the stories, too. Enjoy!!

This week's pick: Spiral Static by Coquette
Rating: R
Summary: After exchanging vows, Edward and Bella head off on a romantic honeymoon. But all too soon the Cullens' post-marital bliss is threatened and Bella is faced with the most difficult decision she'll ever have to make.
Bonus: If you like this one, the author is working on a sequel: Citizen Erased

STINA SAYS: I read this story a few months back and remember being hooked on it from the get go. It's extremely well written and has a very interesting storyline. The smut is good, but unlike most fics centering around Bella and Edward's honeymoon, this one has a conflict. It's also much more realistic than most fics that deal with their first time together. Coquettishness writes the love scene with danger and uncertainty, which I find very intriguing and in character. This is a must-read in my opinion. It's very difficult to come by stories that are well written with an original and actual plotline and conflict. Plus the smut is great as well ;).
Stina's rating: 9 pillows

SHEENA SAYS: This is another well-written story that takes a little bit of a different twist on Stephenie Meyer's version of Breaking Dawn. For the adult crowd, there's some smut, and personally I think that had Meyer written out the wedding night scenario, it would have been somewhat along the lines of this piece. There's a great storyline that will keep you reading and get your heart racing as you hurry to see what happens next. This one isn't for the faint of heart, though, and the ending is bittersweet and emotional, so ladies, grab your Kleenex.
Sheena's rating: 9 fangs

Now it's your turn. Tell us what you think!

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Comment by Alison Genet on March 11, 2009 at 5:11pm
off to read it back with thoughts
Comment by Jess (Team Hexagon Love) on March 11, 2009 at 5:37pm
thats where alpha is, ha, anyhow im going to re-read this soon, this first 6 chapters were quite good.
Comment by Alison Genet on March 11, 2009 at 11:30pm
okay read all of spiral static and all of the citizen erased. damn you ladies for taking over my entire evening! I need warning next time. while I think spiral is better cause is has the smut I love, citizen erased is a little more irratic but I am dying to know what happens next. please let me know when the next chapter is up. I want to kick the russian guy arse!
Comment by Princess Alie~♥~ on March 12, 2009 at 11:11am
I have one I would (very much) like to be reviewed,
The link is:
I can't really read this (my school computer blocks all good websites) but it sounds really good and I will read it when I get a chance.
Comment by Zhaan King on March 14, 2009 at 1:12pm
I loved it. I noticed it hasn't been updated since 11/08. Do you think she'll finish it?


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