Hey Jonathan! You asked me a question about what I thought you might do about making your "language" more American. The only thing I can say is yes to the spellings of those words that are pronounced the same but spelled slightly differently, and don't leave out the "the". Example: I'm going to University in the Fall" here in the States we'd say I'm going to the University ( probably also add which one ) in the Fall. It could be just me too as I come from a different generation.
hi.how have you been??i saw the new chapter but i had no time to read it,anyway i am sure it's amazing...how this thing started? i am very curious,how you started wirting and how did u got all those ideas??hugs and kisses.